Who

for whose live I give mine
its you
for whoes breath I watch 
whoes blink facinates
whose scent entrances 
hypnotic
erotic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/9/2012 7:39:00 AM
You are completely enthralled with your lover..he is mesmerizing to you. Wow..I wonder if my spouse were a poet if he would write of such love? Wow. Nice. Gwendolen
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Veronica Joseph
Date: 2/17/2012 6:50:00 PM
I am completely enthralled.....its true.
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