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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

Whitney 2 - Help


I left him

my suitcase full

I ran fast

but he followed

and found me-

I had to HIDE
 
trembling with closed eyes, "I  prayed"

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September 5, 2017

Whitney Verse/HELP
Copyright Protected, ID 937527


Written for the contest, Whitney 2
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Fourth Place

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James Inman

September 27, 2017 at 9:16 AM

An intense scene you've created in your poem BW. A scene that is played out too often in our world. Well written.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

September 12, 2017 at 1:45 AM

Congratulations, BW on your placement.

Eve Roper

September 11, 2017 at 10:51 PM

Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

September 11, 2017 at 6:24 PM

Congrats!!! Constance... on a beautiful win my friend...god bless and stay well...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2017 at 5:41 PM

Wow, I REALLY like how you did yours, Constance. THAT is a scenario I see played out on my crime drama channel ID all the time. One of my favorites here. Congrats on the win.

Heidi Sands

September 11, 2017 at 2:30 PM

Congratulations Broken Wings :)

Jack Webster

September 11, 2017 at 12:35 PM

Congratulations! Such an important story to tell.

Nette Onclaud

September 11, 2017 at 11:53 AM

constance, delicately scribed with a sense of helplessness...i congratulate you for a splendid win!...thanks lots for joining this challenge.. huggs

John Lawless

September 6, 2017 at 9:43 AM

BW, you have touched the core of terror with this brief yet powerful encounter.

Russell Sivey

September 6, 2017 at 5:11 AM

Wow, this is fantastic Constance! What an entry into Nette's contest! You have tugged on my heartstrings and made me feel for this woman in your poem, quite magnificently! That is the whole point of writing, to bring feelings of whatever you are trying to portray, and you have done an excellent job at this! What a tremendous piece, Great Work my friend!!

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