Whitney 2 - Escape

Dawn sheds light
On my escape
With one case,
Frozen in fear.
Seasonal fields
Share golden hues
With God's optimistic light.

9--4-17

Whitney 2 Contest
Sponsor Nette Onclaud

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James Inman

September 27, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Hope for a new beginning, a beautiful thought Connie.

Eve Roper

September 11, 2017 at 10:49 PM

Congratulations on your win, Connie, Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

September 11, 2017 at 5:47 PM

Back to Congrats!!! Connie...great job my friend...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2017 at 5:40 PM

Connie, I love how you interpreted the picture with your verse here. Congrats on your win!

Heidi Sands

September 11, 2017 at 2:29 PM

Congratulations Connie. I love the ending :)

Vijay Pandit

September 11, 2017 at 12:50 PM

Congrats Connie!

Jack Webster

September 11, 2017 at 12:32 PM

Conrgratulations, Connie! This illustrates such a great moment of courage and faith!

Connie Marcum Wong

September 11, 2017 at 2:56 PM

That is what I was going for Jack. Thank you you for your insightful comment. : )

Nette Onclaud

September 11, 2017 at 11:45 AM

connie, the positive energy along with the beauty of your lines make this a winner... happy congrats and thanks for taking part in this contest!..huggs

Connie Marcum Wong

September 11, 2017 at 2:53 PM

Thank you you Nette. I tried to include the picture of the case but couldn't get it to show up. I enjoyed your contest and all the entries. : )