John Lawless Poet Verse

Whitney 2 - Destiny

Destiny

Carries its dreams

Encased in

Crumpled leather

Awaiting

Fate’s trembling touch

Old hands clutching a promise



9/5/2017


submitted to WHITNEY 2 – Poetry Contest

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James Inman September 27, 2017 at 8:54 AM An excellent write John, very touching.

Eve Roper September 11, 2017 at 10:41 PM Congratulations on your win, John, Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior September 11, 2017 at 6:12 PM Congrats!!! John on your fine placement...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues September 11, 2017 at 6:07 PM Very nice, John! Congrats,

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2017 at 5:35 PM Excellent verse on this picture theme, JOhn. BIG congrats

Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 2:26 PM Nice one John. Congratulations :)

Jack Webster September 11, 2017 at 12:14 PM oooh! this is so nice. it has me hooked. i want more! i hope you'll use this as a beginning for a longer poem!

Jan Allison September 11, 2017 at 12:13 PM Many congratulations John I love your take on the contest theme:-) many congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2017 at 10:39 AM ok john, you got me hooked on your flowing, touching images... sweet congrats for your winning slot and thanks for supporting this contest.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2017 at 6:11 PM wow, this is amazing. I have seen only one other that is this good (and it was not mine. haha)

Dale Gregory Cozart September 6, 2017 at 11:40 AM This is gorgeous! Good luck!