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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

Whitney2: Suitcase

One suitcase
Left in a field
Purposely
Like a bread crumb
On a trail
Dropped by Hansel
So he may find his way home

Copyright © Dale Gregory Cozart | Year Posted 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2017 at 5:45 PM

You were kind of on the same track as I was but veered off in an opposite direction from me in this theme. I really like how this turned into a "bread crumb" kind of symbol!!

Dale Gregory Cozart

September 6, 2017 at 6:03 PM

I wrote two sedokas. This was the one I like better. Thanks so much for your comments.

September 5, 2017 at 10:05 AM

Well crafted my friend...luck for the contest...god bless...^WW^

Dale Gregory Cozart

September 5, 2017 at 10:12 AM

Thanks, WW.

September 4, 2017 at 3:59 PM

Well written verse--good imagination!

Dale Gregory Cozart

September 5, 2017 at 10:13 AM

Thanks, Vijay.

September 4, 2017 at 2:31 PM

Oh how clever Dale I have got 5 lines done then the muse failed but the silly limerick came to me:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

September 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Thanks, Jan. I LOVE your limerick. But this poem is the first time in days the muse got out of bed and actually did something.

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