Heidi Sands Poet Verse

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Whitney-2 She Rests

Suitcase sits
                In golden grass
                  She was hit
                She ran so fast
                   Get away
              She thought, inside
      Nearby, she rests where she lays


Heidi Sands

9/5/17

*Placed 5th in the  Whitney-2 Contest.

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James Inman September 27, 2017 at 9:21 AM Heidi, you've written a song of sorrow. Running away from a bad situation in hope of a better tomorrow only to have a twist of fate destroy her dream. Nicely done. Heidi Sands September 27, 2017 at 9:32 AM Thank you for your visit and comment on this James :)

Paul Callus September 16, 2017 at 9:09 AM Your words set our imagination working, Heidi! Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul Heidi Sands September 16, 2017 at 9:10 AM Thank you , Paul :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 12, 2017 at 1:41 AM Congratulations, Heidi for placement. Heidi Sands September 12, 2017 at 7:02 AM Thank you Subimal :)

Eve Roper September 11, 2017 at 10:54 PM Back to Congratulate you, Heidi, Hugs Eve Heidi Sands September 12, 2017 at 7:01 AM Thank you, Eve :)

Winged Warrior September 11, 2017 at 6:04 PM Congrats!!! Heidi on a beautiful write and win...god bless...^WW^ Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 6:21 PM Thank you WW :)

Vijay Pandit September 11, 2017 at 12:51 PM Congrats Heidi! Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thank you Vijay :)

Jack Webster September 11, 2017 at 12:40 PM Congratulations Heidi! Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thank you Jack :)

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2017 at 11:56 AM melancholic, heidi, well written... best congrats on your award and thanks for coming by...huggs Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thank you Nette :)

Eve Roper September 7, 2017 at 9:19 PM I love this poem, Heidi, luck in the contest..... Hugs Eve ~`* Heidi Sands September 7, 2017 at 9:23 PM I am happy to hear that Eve. Thank you :)

Silent One September 6, 2017 at 8:24 AM Nice write for the contest Heidi.. Heidi Sands September 6, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you, Silent One :)

Probir Gupta September 6, 2017 at 7:23 AM Nice reflections with impressive images ... Heidi Sands September 6, 2017 at 7:26 AM Thank you Probir :)

Russell Sivey September 6, 2017 at 5:07 AM This write is very powerful and has great imagery, something that Nette will love reading! I foresee high marks for this incredible poem! I surely loved reading this tremendous poem this morning, what a glorious piece, Great Work my friend!! Heidi Sands September 6, 2017 at 5:14 AM Thank you for the positive feedback. Nice to see you at the site today and to read your pleasant comments :)

Supraja Kannan September 6, 2017 at 4:00 AM Great imagery... Good luck in the contest... Heidi Sands September 6, 2017 at 5:13 AM Thank you Supraja :)

Joseph May September 5, 2017 at 5:53 PM Nicely penned Heidi...best wishes Heidi Sands September 5, 2017 at 5:56 PM Thanks so much Joseph :)

Gary Smith September 5, 2017 at 5:27 PM Hauntingly beautiful Heidi, good luck :) Heidi Sands September 5, 2017 at 5:34 PM Thank you for your comment and support Gary :)

Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 5:19 PM Lovely imagination--well done Heidi--good luck!! Heidi Sands September 5, 2017 at 5:20 PM Thank you Vijay :)