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Whitish Sun's Glint

Thru cracks in the clouds whitish sun glints No warmth issues forth barren rock without flint Clouds return ash-gray no matter I squint despondent sun keeps away done, today's stint

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Date: 11/7/2022 11:10:00 PM
Jazzy rhyme my friend!
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:58:00 AM
Ah, the winter sun here in Alberta. We have to get used to it because it's gonna be here for awhile. Been trying to do some Fall cleaning and get prepared for the long winter months ahead. Nice job here as always Gershon. God Bless, JB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2022 8:24:00 PM
Ouch. We're getting the last of the Summer-Fall sun here in Chicago lately, from about 11:30 a.m. - 3:00 p.m. Sure is nice to feel those warm rays. Strength and Faith, Gershon
Date: 11/1/2022 8:20:00 AM
And that ash-gray creeps over my shoulder as I try to see the page. :) A sign of Autumn here.
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:19:00 AM
Nice one. I enjoy your poetry :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2022 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. And I sure enjoy receiving comments like yours. Peace, Gershon
Date: 10/31/2022 12:43:00 PM
I saw those clouds today too!
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