Joanna Daniel Poet Other

White-Winged Wonder

A white-winged visitor stops by ~ Multichromatic flowers' delight 

amid rainbow hues
flies a lone white butterfly ~
colourless wonder

Flitting by, dazzling bright, 
There she comes, cabbage white, 
Blooms laugh at her tickle, 
God's undyed miracle. 



29th May 2023

{Monoku: 17 syllables
Haiku: 5.7.5 syllables
Rhyme: aabb scheme, 6 syllables per line}


Contest: A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme - same theme
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Linda Alice Fowler June 14, 2023 at 7:35 AM I love your "...undyed miracle." Jo. Quite lovely and serene scene you've painted. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2023 at 2:22 AM - Congratulations Jo... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs

Tania Kitchin June 12, 2023 at 3:40 PM Joanna, a beautiful set of poems, congratulations on your winning placement!

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 31, 2023 at 11:30 AM Oooh yeahh wow God's undyed and dyed are all miracles and beauties, us we love white creatures. Kudos for this beautiful angelic poem!  >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2023 at 12:13 PM Love to see them in summertime Joanna, won't be long before they're fluttering around my garden performing aerial ballet. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit May 30, 2023 at 10:54 AM Beautiful images in every form. Well done, Jo.

Victor Buhagiar May 30, 2023 at 10:18 AM You dazzled me with your poem.

Alexis Y. May 30, 2023 at 7:44 AM WoW! Jo, You did a great job with the contest theme. Nice rhythm and flow. It has good content and imagery as well. Butterflies are beautiful creatures. Best wishes in the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis