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[Couplet] Light would be an empty sky No clouds or color for us to spy Without whiteness nothing would reflect With the eyes no objects could we detect Blindness in a world of light What to do without your sight? [Rhyme] The core of all color in this world Around it is which all colors curled It begins with whiteness in the light That joy of seeing a bird take flight [Haiku] The spectrum exists Because whiteness is in light Light stops existence? "Whiteness" contest entries

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Date: 10/22/2012 7:39:00 AM
Hello Tom I am contacting you to let you know I have sent you soup mail, I find I cannot blog at The moment..well for the last few days as a matter Of fact anyway I would be obliged if you could look At your inbox.. God bless you, Joe..)
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Date: 10/10/2012 4:42:00 PM
nicely penned; love the imagery here, tom... enjoyed your perception of this color... winning huggs!
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Date: 10/9/2012 12:33:00 PM
pleased to read this piece Tom; I feel that you put in a lot of thougjt and effort here.. I wish you well in the contest.." I would place this quite high..!
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:43:00 PM
Lovely! Good entry I say. Cynthia
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