Whiteboard Gold

roiling with rainfall

effacement of whiteboard gold

    smudge of sunset highs

bleak venue of tinkling notes

           rusting aluminum roof

2/24/2020
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Canerdy Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Perfect poem for me to read as the rain falls here tonight--Good tanka, Kim. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, sweet poetess!
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:11 PM
This is very cool. So creative, kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Andrea! So many days of rain to contemplate.
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