This poetry form is called a Stylized Unrhymed Quatrain Eclipse, consisting of 4 lines of 5-5-7-10 syllables respectively.
Once upon a time Distant memories Dawning of morning crystals Glittering reminder of starlight tears In sunbeam's brilliance Lighting jewels shine Songbirds break into chorus The smallest fragment of a breeze alerts The senses whistling Melodies explode Through the branches leaves lament Observing nature's space hold in colors Fruit of tenderness Mellow your sunshine Blossoms love supreme touching Fingers raise deep golden feelings yearning Addresses one's heart Lonely dust remains Breathing breathless light explores In darkness echoes bounce off deep caverns Cold howling shivers Devouring warm blood Into the bones whistling ice Winds voice of the lost souls' eyes turn bright green As the spirit leaves Dark moldy shadows Light of moon sources cravings Beauties kiss eclipses rose bleeds scarlet Immortal heartbeats Life stops ticking bang Seduced black velvet pleasure Sinking fangs into the succumbing heart Drum beats slow echo Fallen unchained truths Slithering lizards crawling Underneath the skin a beastly vision Storm roars through timbers Translucent blood slime Flowing toxic energy Mutating hollers screech into wolf moon Scalding hot flames breathe When red embers burn Into the lustful ashes Born inside scarred remains breathing wounds An itch that scratches Onto the mindset Greenish cornea expands Opening curtains in a split second Haunting prey on light Affliction of need Rasping rattle in the throat Death yowls airless scream without sun visions A Collaborated Poem with Liam McDaid and Angeline Lim
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