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white water surfers

Collective Senryu

Dolphin Pod

white water surfers
dolphin pod squeals sea shanties ~
gymnasts of the sea

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Len Gasun

August 17, 2024 at 9:52 PM

A fantastic senryu with its amazing image my dearest poet friend Sam. I'm glad to be back and read this precious gem of yours. Blessings to you always and your writings.

Sam Kauffman

September 3, 2024 at 11:08 AM

Dearest Len, so wonderful to have you back in the soup! Thank you my sweet friend for your wonderful response to this poem. I love dolphins - amazing gifts from our Creator. Sending you abundant blessings in this time of blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

August 17, 2024 at 12:21 PM

This is really cute. Dolphins are my favorite mammals. They and the elephant are smartest .

Sam Kauffman

September 3, 2024 at 11:06 AM

Hi Andrea! As you can see I am REALLY behind in answering emails. I don't think I will ever get caught up! What a challenge. Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback and your constant support! They are like precious jewels. I, too, love dolphins. Didn't know about their intelligence rivaling the elephant. Also wanted to wish you a very happy birthday on the fifth! September 5th is my mother-in-law's birthday. May your special day be filled with extra special blessings!

Sara Kendrick

August 16, 2024 at 2:07 PM

Ahh!! Yes, the sea gymnasts. I enjoyed reading this creative one. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

September 3, 2024 at 10:58 AM

Hi Sara! Dolphins are truly aquatic grace and a gift from our Creator! Thank you for your visit and lovely feedback! Sending you continued prayers and an abundance of blessings in this time of abundance!

Suzanne Delaney

August 15, 2024 at 2:25 PM

A beautiful dolphin Senryu,Sam, You captured the spirit of these playful creatures perfectly.

Sam Kauffman

August 17, 2024 at 10:12 AM

Hi SuZ! Thank you for your most thoughtful feedback! As serious as life can be for dolphins in the ocean, they never lose their smiles, their joy or their playfulness. A wonderful life lesson for me. Hope you are well. So great to hear from you. Sending you blessings of joy!

Ink Empress

August 15, 2024 at 2:43 AM

Ah samszy, this is so clever and well written: yes dolphins they are the gymnasts of the sea! I also love the opening line “ white water surfers” beautiful! What an exquisite write! And second line , i love “ sea shanties “ so cool! Pleasure always reading your imaginative writes, even in the form of senryu youv delivered on that is so descriptive and beautiful. Loved this. Sending you light always. Best wishes

Paul Callus

August 14, 2024 at 12:39 PM

Dolphins are definitely sea gymnasts, Sam!! I love their squeals, and I can assure you from experience that swimming with dolphins is awesome. ~ Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman

August 17, 2024 at 10:09 AM

I am so amazed by these aquatic acrobats! What a wonderful and very memorable experience to swim with dolphins! Hopefully some day I will the chance to experience these awesome animals in the same way! Was given the chance to pet dolphins a couple of times and I will never forget how wonderful it was. Paul, thank you for your feedback and sharing your experience. Blessings!!

Paige Hind

August 13, 2024 at 2:21 PM

Very creative- a new way for me to look at it <3

Sam Kauffman

August 17, 2024 at 10:03 AM

Thank you so much, Paige! How delightful to know this gave you a new insight into these amazing animals of the sea! Grace and peace to you!

David Kavanagh

August 13, 2024 at 1:44 PM

Well Sam I’d certainly rather watch and listen to dolphin pods, then my IPods, they really know how to have a good time, and have a smile to match, all the best in contest, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

August 17, 2024 at 10:02 AM

Hi David! I'm with you on the "pods!" Dolphins are a real treasure of the sea. Ever playful. Always smiling. Thank you so much for your gest wishes and sharing in the joy of these amazing animals! Cheers and blessings!

I Am Anaya

August 13, 2024 at 12:55 PM

Wow, Sam this is good! The collective nouns are there...threw in an adjective for good luck ha. We are allowed one verb. Erm (guess they spell um like that) wondering why there is an extra Dolphin Pod? GL in the contest

I Am Anaya

August 15, 2024 at 12:15 PM

;)

Sam Kauffman

August 15, 2024 at 11:48 AM

Hi Anaya! I am so glad you enjoyed this swim with a dolphin pod! Had an up close and personal experience with dolphins. Absolutely unforgettable! Was hoping to capture their bright-eyed playful grace. Thank you for your good wishes! Sending you blessings of joy!

Tom Cunningham

August 13, 2024 at 12:06 PM

Love the image Sam, I was snorkeling when I was in Mauritius and a pod of about seven swam right under me, I've never forgotten it Over Fork Over. Tom

Sam Kauffman

August 15, 2024 at 11:29 AM

What an amazing, and yes, unforgettable experience, Tom. We got to experience the wonder of dolphins by petting them. I would love to experience what you experienced. They are truly a marvel of creation and one of my favorite animals. It was a joy to write about a pod of playful dolphins! Hope you are well. Over Fork Over!!