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White Water Lilies

Weiße Seerosen / White Water Lilies / Lotos blancos Weiße Seerosen Sie tanzen einen Reigen Auf dunklem Wasser White water lilies They perform a round dance Over dark water Los lotos blancos Ellos bailan una rueda Sobre el agua oscura

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/25/2011 10:11:00 AM

I like the contrast you put on this... white on dark.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 5:32:00 PM

I am here again~ I really miss your poetry and comments Gert, i suppose we all have to take care of all... and a very beautiful image. Lillies for some reason are on my attraction,,, have a wonderful blessed day,..p.d.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 6:26:00 AM

Im reading below and it seems you re still suffering from pain,you're in my prayers,dear..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 6:22:00 AM

What a beauty,you are a gem

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/13/2011 10:14:00 AM

Dear Gert, please don't add to your pain by writing comments. I love hearing your thoughts, but I want more to see you get well. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2011 8:00:00 AM

oh Gert wish there were something I could do for u my friend to ease the pain ...it must be an awful feeling and we will continue to keep u in prayer and on prayer chain at Church .. please let me know how u are doing when u can and as often as u can luv.. miss u and your fantastic poetry so unique.. thankxx to Jack for relaying messages to u luv.. if u want to my e mail address is: petitepoetess@yahoo.com.. if u are able luv.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2011 7:31:00 PM

wow, Gert, I love the contrast this haiku presents. AWesome. How ARE you, anyway?

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/3/2011 12:22:00 PM

Happy almost end of spring, Gert. Just like Monet--you captured the entire essence--the mood--and the dance! Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 5/29/2011 1:10:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Gert. And always so beautiful in German and Spanish too.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/29/2011 12:22:00 PM

I could just imagine this Gert :) those water lilies dancing-- beautiful indeed! I hope you rarm and shoulder aren't bothering you too much-- enjoy your week and Alles Gute! Hugs :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 5:40:00 PM

Beautiful ,, Gert, bonito... light always defeats the dark... enjoyed.. p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 11:26:00 AM

What a beautiful image of the lilies on a dark pond, Gert! You're such a great writer and teacher as well. Got the German and Spanish words for water correct. (I read the English last.) Also got the Spanish word for white. I'm praying you receive some good news regarding your health. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 5/24/2011 10:45:00 AM

I love the thought of these lilies dancing on the dark water Gert. Best to you, Diane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 12:20:00 PM

and look lovely as they do Gert.. such a beautiful portrait in these words... hope u are doing well my friend.. we are now happy to be home luv.. enjoy a terrific Sunday my friend...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 4:18:00 AM

A fine vusual created with great images, Gert