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White Water

Water so white flowing freely Cascading down the slightly Graded rock in the cool creek As the land levels, the water Becomes yellow with autumn leaves

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Audrey Haick

Date: 12/16/2009 11:13:00 AM

What a beautiful sight you've created here, Sara! Totally delightful! Thank you for your kind comments on my work! Peace and love, Audrey

John Freeman

Date: 12/11/2009 7:28:00 PM

Such an inviting place you paint with your picture of relaxing words of beauty Sara. God Bless, Sincerely, Love, Moses

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/11/2009 5:02:00 AM

Thanks for your constant fellowship and comments on my poem, I truly write for the enjoyment and provocation too of special people like yourself ... you are special not just because you read my work, but because you are an exceptional writer.

James Fraser

Date: 12/10/2009 12:05:00 PM

Kool rhyme Sara >> James

Brian Strand

Date: 12/9/2009 11:47:00 PM

Your words flow like the stream itself Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/9/2009 7:08:00 PM

yes relaxing poem, nicely done mom, hope you are having a good day.

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/9/2009 4:00:00 PM

How relaxing.Hope all is well.

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/9/2009 11:17:00 AM

What a beautiful picturesque piece you have penned...thanks so much for sharing~Mary

Lena Townsend

Date: 12/9/2009 9:46:00 AM

A beautiful visual in this piece. I love it. I can almost hear the sound of the water rippling over the rock. Well penned. Smiles from Lolita

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/9/2009 6:21:00 AM

Beautiful image in this poem...I love the last two lines especially! ~Juliane

Brian Strand

Date: 12/9/2009 12:47:00 AM

Sara ,nice one May your gifts multiply in new directions in 2010 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/8/2009 3:36:00 PM

Your words paint a refreshing picture, Sara! Those white water rapids are calling my name and one day I'll fulfill my bucket list by canoeing down them. Great work! Love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/8/2009 3:36:00 PM

can you imagin inner city children that never ever see this? jhl

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/8/2009 2:18:00 PM

I wrote the poem Thank You to the secretary of the pierce county sheriffs office.Her and I have the same birthday and have been friends for a few years.I don't tell her everything because she will send the sheriff to my house if I am to bad.Thanx for the comment.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/8/2009 12:46:00 PM

Gorgeous image here, Sara, well penned. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Love and blessings, Caroline.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/8/2009 10:59:00 AM

A beautiful scene painted by your wonderful words. Masterful in every way...Raul

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/8/2009 9:20:00 AM

This is neat.Hope your day is good.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 8:13:00 AM

Rafting??? Florida???? Very nice rhyme, Sara. Keep the words flowing! Love to you. Dane Ann (Soup mail)

Tobey Hill

Date: 12/8/2009 7:28:00 AM

nicely done..I can clearly see this scene of beauty...TAH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/8/2009 7:16:00 AM

I can visualize it now Sara.. beautiful descriptive poetry today.. enjoyed.. Linda-Marie,, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/8/2009 7:07:00 AM

Wonderful imagery as usual Sara.... I am bathing in your flowing, cool creek... Drying while walking atop the fall leaves..... Wonderful indeed.....:JP]