White Water

Water so white flowing freely
Cascading down the slightly
Graded rock in the cool creek
As the land levels, the water
Becomes yellow with autumn leaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 11:13 AM
What a beautiful sight you've created here, Sara! Totally delightful! Thank you for your kind comments on my work! Peace and love, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Such an inviting place you paint with your picture of relaxing words of beauty Sara. God Bless, Sincerely, Love, Moses
Shango Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 5:02 AM
Thanks for your constant fellowship and comments on my poem, I truly write for the enjoyment and provocation too of special people like yourself ... you are special not just because you read my work, but because you are an exceptional writer.
Fraser Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Kool rhyme Sara >> James
Strand Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Your words flow like the stream itself Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and welcome comments today.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 7:08 PM
yes relaxing poem, nicely done mom, hope you are having a good day.
Bono Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 4:00 PM
How relaxing.Hope all is well.
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 11:17 AM
What a beautiful picturesque piece you have penned...thanks so much for sharing~Mary
Townsend Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 9:46 AM
A beautiful visual in this piece. I love it. I can almost hear the sound of the water rippling over the rock. Well penned. Smiles from Lolita
Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:21 AM
Beautiful image in this poem...I love the last two lines especially! ~Juliane
Strand Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Sara ,nice one May your gifts multiply in new directions in 2010 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
Devonshire Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Your words paint a refreshing picture, Sara! Those white water rapids are calling my name and one day I'll fulfill my bucket list by canoeing down them. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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December 8, 2009 at 3:36 PM
can you imagin inner city children that never ever see this? jhl
Bono Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 2:18 PM
I wrote the poem Thank You to the secretary of the pierce county sheriffs office.Her and I have the same birthday and have been friends for a few years.I don't tell her everything because she will send the sheriff to my house if I am to bad.Thanx for the comment.
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December 8, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Gorgeous image here, Sara, well penned. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Love and blessings, Caroline.
Moreno Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 10:59 AM
A beautiful scene painted by your wonderful words. Masterful in every way...Raul
Bono Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 9:20 AM
This is neat.Hope your day is good.
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December 8, 2009 at 8:13 AM
Rafting??? Florida???? Very nice rhyme, Sara. Keep the words flowing! Love to you. Dane Ann (Soup mail)
Hill Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 7:28 AM
nicely done..I can clearly see this scene of beauty...TAH
Sweetheart Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 7:16 AM
I can visualize it now Sara.. beautiful descriptive poetry today.. enjoyed.. Linda-Marie,, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Pickett Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Wonderful imagery as usual Sara.... I am bathing in your flowing, cool creek... Drying while walking atop the fall leaves..... Wonderful indeed.....:JP]
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