Kristen Bruni Poet Rhyme

White Wash

Santorini,Greece my top pick
staring out to the Aegean Sea.
Blissful emotion in my heart
this island set me free.

White washed caves to sleep in
fresh fruit to tempt your tongue.
Riding mopeds to black rock beaches
topless in the sun. 

Music fills the air at night
my ears are filled with soul.
Dancing freely in the bars
making me feel whole.

Braided locks of rainbow threads
fall down my shoulders bare.
Mud bath waters to sail to
softens feet to hair.

Winds of purity
sweep across my face.
Ill forever remember Greece
My most special place.

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Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2011 at 12:15 PM I've seen pictures and movies of these kinds of places in Greece, Kristen. I think Greece would make a most memorable vacation place. conrats on your poem describing it so beautifully.

Jack Horne May 6, 2011 at 1:55 PM Many congrats on your win : )

Elaine George May 6, 2011 at 4:07 AM I would love, one day to go there. Thank you for this beautiful glimpse. Many congrats on your WIN, Kristen. Lainie

Tahera Mannan May 5, 2011 at 10:21 PM I too would love to go to Greece. Many congrats for this win.

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2011 at 7:44 PM smokin', kristen.. love the detailed embroidery of this piece with best cheers for the greeeat win! :) huggs!

John Freeman May 5, 2011 at 6:16 PM Kristen, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor May 5, 2011 at 1:39 PM Congrats on your win, Kristen. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2011 at 1:29 PM Congrats Kristen on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure.. enjoy with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 1:02 PM You make Greece sound like a wonderful place to visit, Kristen. Would love to see the "braided locks of rainbow threads" and feel the "winds of purity" sweep across my face. Great poem! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn

Cory Long May 5, 2011 at 12:27 PM congrats on the win..cory

Dr.Ram Mehta May 5, 2011 at 12:14 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, kristen

Carol Sunshine Brown May 5, 2011 at 11:51 AM Congratulations Kristen on your 8th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Cory Long May 3, 2011 at 2:59 PM I would love to go to greece. It sounds like a great place. nice write. cory

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 3, 2011 at 7:42 AM Delightful Kristen .. a lovely place u have depicted in your lines and intriguing sights to see and partake of ..Greece is one place we have not visited but we are off to Italy Saturday night for two glorious weeks.. good luck in the contest luv..

Gautami Phookan May 3, 2011 at 4:10 AM Yes Kristen, Greece is like that. the walls brushed white look whiter than white in the sun. you've so nicely captured the beauty in your words. 'Braided locks of rainbow threads...softens feet to hair...this piece has dazzled me. Wishing you good luck if it is for a contest..Love, gautami