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Santorini,Greece my top pick staring out to the Aegean Sea. Blissful emotion in my heart this island set me free. White washed caves to sleep in fresh fruit to tempt your tongue. Riding mopeds to black rock beaches topless in the sun. Music fills the air at night my ears are filled with soul. Dancing freely in the bars making me feel whole. Braided locks of rainbow threads fall down my shoulders bare. Mud bath waters to sail to softens feet to hair. Winds of purity sweep across my face. Ill forever remember Greece My most special place.

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Date: 5/7/2011 12:15:00 PM
I've seen pictures and movies of these kinds of places in Greece, Kristen. I think Greece would make a most memorable vacation place. conrats on your poem describing it so beautifully.
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:55:00 PM
Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:07:00 AM
I would love, one day to go there. Thank you for this beautiful glimpse. Many congrats on your WIN, Kristen. Lainie
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Date: 5/5/2011 10:21:00 PM
I too would love to go to Greece. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:44:00 PM
smokin', kristen.. love the detailed embroidery of this piece with best cheers for the greeeat win! :) huggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:16:00 PM
Kristen, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kristen. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 5/5/2011 1:02:00 PM
You make Greece sound like a wonderful place to visit, Kristen. Would love to see the "braided locks of rainbow threads" and feel the "winds of purity" sweep across my face. Great poem! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:27:00 PM
congrats on the win..cory
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, kristen
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations Kristen on your 8th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 2:59:00 PM
I would love to go to greece. It sounds like a great place. nice write. cory
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:42:00 AM
Delightful Kristen .. a lovely place u have depicted in your lines and intriguing sights to see and partake of ..Greece is one place we have not visited but we are off to Italy Saturday night for two glorious weeks.. good luck in the contest luv..
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Date: 5/3/2011 4:10:00 AM
Yes Kristen, Greece is like that. the walls brushed white look whiter than white in the sun. you've so nicely captured the beauty in your words. 'Braided locks of rainbow threads...softens feet to hair...this piece has dazzled me. Wishing you good luck if it is for a contest..Love, gautami
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