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White Touch

On White crimson tide
A hollow form to time

Tied to a note of labels
Tonight brought food 

Inches of deep cold borrows
Hid a feeling 

Lonely to white sunlight
She drove the edge

Lurking away the pain
Love has somehow covered

Deep in maroon marrow
Rested by the main

Another form to sight
Along angelic caves

The subtle youth of heartening
Again tore the page

In certain elements of peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/10/2016 6:53:00 AM
Greetings Nisreen. I love the imagery of your piece. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:20:00 AM
thank you for the kind reply. LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:16:00 PM
Hi Nisreen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thank you :)

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