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White Swans

white swans gliding over still waters while sun glints laughingly off each languid movement made by the noisy group they cackle amongst themselves enjoying the comraderie while their nether regions wave gleefully in the misty morning as they dip for food I watch them with a child's eyes which grow wider as the swans take flight overhead and I am reminded how grateful I am for as the swans find their freedom within azure skies so I find my freedom within.

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Date: 12/19/2008 10:27:00 PM
This is so absolutly beautifull. The azure skies is absoultly such a peacefull stanza. You have written this with much imagery that makes the reader actually seeing the swans... Very picturesque Bonnie Collins
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