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white sunflowers hiku

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     s    of white sunflowers  ~ 
bright b u r g e o n
                          i n 
                           g      bliss

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/27/2025 2:13:00 PM

IE, we'll take the bliss for sure! Smiles!!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:24:00 AM

Awn thank you dear duke! Sending you light always hah

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/27/2025 9:02:00 AM

I'm cross-eyed reading Strand idea of a haiku :) Still yours is compact and finely tuned. Sprouts are excellent.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:23:00 AM

Ah you should try dear victor! They are so fun to do: thank you for your visit as always, grateful truly

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/27/2025 8:02:00 AM

wonderful delicacy, enchanted me

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so very much

Suzette Richards

Date: 5/27/2025 12:35:00 AM

This is lovely - to look at and to read, Ink. White sunflowers? That was a new one on me. I learned something new. :) (Looked it up to see what they looked like - gorgeous.) Congrats on your win.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:09:00 AM

Awwn this means alot dear suzette, coming from you, its fun to do these, and white sunflowers~ one of my faves. So pleased with your feedback. Always, grateful. Sending you light

JCB Brul

Date: 5/26/2025 11:22:00 PM

Awwww, so lovely! I have no words! Keep shining dear Ink! Congratulations ^____^JCB

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:08:00 AM

Awwn you are such a kind soul really, i appreciate your support always. Sending you light

Anne Winter

Date: 5/26/2025 10:22:00 PM

A beautiful haiku, gorgeously written as always! You're brilliant!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 7:52:00 AM

Awn always appreciate your kind support dear anne, sending you light

Paige Hind

Date: 5/26/2025 8:51:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous. <3

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 7:51:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much dear paige, grateful always

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/26/2025 6:27:00 PM

Cheek bones speckled with a sapphire tablature of taboo ache turned to love blush beauty, your body moves to song that pitches prettily in the poetry of blossomed joy...J.A.B.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/28/2025 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, for your poetic response