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White Snow Haiku

white snow looking for whispers of a maple leaf chatting with your braid the braid turns purple asks you to move to fire place the snow brownish black look at the grey nights heavy with the falling snow maples distant dream ___________________ 12 January, 2018 For Haiku, I Love You - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/16/2018 2:30:00 PM

The colours sublime.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/16/2018 10:38:00 PM

Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2018 10:32:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2018 11:39:00 AM

Thank you, Kim ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2018 7:46:00 PM

Probir , is more than one haiku allowed? I did see another person doing a series like yours. Anyway. I wanted to tell you, just only showing that first haiku would be enough because that first on is absolutely splendid!!

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2018 5:04:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea for your kind observation ... I am looking into it ...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2018 4:41:00 PM

awesome poetry, love these.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2018 5:02:00 AM

Thank you, Harry ... Your opinion means a lot to me ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2018 8:40:00 AM

Beautiful poem Probir..well written.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/13/2018 4:48:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay ... If it is beautiful to a great poet like you, that itself is a prize ...