Probir Gupta Poet Haiku

White Snow Haiku

white snow looking for
whispers of a maple leaf
chatting with your braid

the braid turns purple
asks you to move to fire place
the snow brownish black

look at the grey nights
heavy  with the  falling snow
maples distant dream 
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12 January, 2018

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton January 16, 2018 at 2:30 PM The colours sublime. Probir Gupta January 16, 2018 at 10:38 PM Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2018 at 10:32 AM Lovely haiku, Probir! Probir Gupta January 13, 2018 at 11:39 AM Thank you, Kim ...

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2018 at 7:46 PM Probir , is more than one haiku allowed? I did see another person doing a series like yours. Anyway. I wanted to tell you, just only showing that first haiku would be enough because that first on is absolutely splendid!! Probir Gupta January 13, 2018 at 5:04 AM Thanks, Andrea for your kind observation ... I am looking into it ...

Harry Horsman January 12, 2018 at 4:41 PM awesome poetry, love these. Probir Gupta January 13, 2018 at 5:02 AM Thank you, Harry ... Your opinion means a lot to me ...

Vijay Pandit January 12, 2018 at 8:40 AM Beautiful poem Probir..well written. Probir Gupta January 13, 2018 at 4:48 AM Thank you, Vijay ... If it is beautiful to a great poet like you, that itself is a prize ...