White Roses

A Renga:


Midmorning sunlight
White roses climbing the fence
Next to the driveway

On a Saturday in May
A rooster pecks at the ground

"It's in the details,"
The lawyer looks at the case,
Sifting evidence

Of geological time
Displayed on the canyon walls

Snow on the ledges
Shadows rapidly lengthen
As days quickly pass

Her daughter is a stranger
With friends and views of her own

Light from the stained glass window
And candles of remembrance

Mingling with the sharp incense
And the sound of falling leaves

Rolling down the street
On his well-dented skateboard
Jumpng the high curb

Busy shoppers holding bags
Purchases from here and there

Moonlight can't compete
With the glow of the city
Or the internet

This is their first face to face
They first met in cyberspace

What will people read
From the books published today
Centuries from now?

"It really doesn't matter.
I know you didn't mean it."

The afternoon heat
Makes it hard to concentrate,
To apologize

At the fountain by the store
In the city's public square

There's a rainbow in the air
Between clouds of gray and white
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 1:29 AM
Lik that inner poem Jim in the last couplet.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Wilson Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Adeleke, excellent idea. I've just changed the form. Thanks for the suggestion.
Adeite Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:19 AM
why dont you change the form to verse.. Great you Jim! this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
Adeite Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:19 AM
this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 9:47 AM
Lovisz!Keep your poetry imagery-worth like this one:)
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Intersting write. Combinations of thoughts. God Bless. Vince
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