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White Pumpkin Gets Even

Gleaming white in field. All Hallows Eve approaches, Great White Pumpkin stirs! Knowing he is odd, The Great White Pumpkin rises, Seeking his revenge!

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/22/2009 8:10:00 PM

Nice Halloween Haiku, Martin. My favorite form 575 and you did a beautiful job. Thanks for your comment on my Hearts Against Will. Love, Iolanda

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/21/2009 6:37:00 PM

Great haiku. I like the idea (and fact) that it's odd. Wish you the best if this is for Raul's contest. And thanks for checking out my poems. I appreciate it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2009 2:51:00 PM

Love the double Haiku. I am not sure about the white pumpkin hope that he stays away. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/21/2009 11:54:00 AM

Awesome scary write Martin. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/21/2009 9:01:00 AM

Neat Haiku,(s) Martin! Great imagery- I am transported to a lone house on a lonely country road, looking over the window on a bright moon lit night. And what do I see- a pumpkin patch with a single Great White Pumpkin! Wait...did I see it rise? It's moving!!! It's coming at me!! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/21/2009 7:56:00 AM

A new approach to the contest....scary and haunting!! Good luck with this great Halloween fright! ~ Carrie