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White Pumpkin Gets Even

Gleaming white in field.
All Hallows Eve approaches,
Great White Pumpkin stirs!

Knowing he is odd,
The Great White Pumpkin rises,
Seeking his revenge!

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Iolanda Scripca

October 22, 2009 at 8:10 PM

Nice Halloween Haiku, Martin. My favorite form 575 and you did a beautiful job. Thanks for your comment on my Hearts Against Will. Love, Iolanda

Ismael Nieves

October 21, 2009 at 6:37 PM

Great haiku. I like the idea (and fact) that it's odd. Wish you the best if this is for Raul's contest. And thanks for checking out my poems. I appreciate it.

Sara Kendrick

October 21, 2009 at 2:51 PM

Love the double Haiku. I am not sure about the white pumpkin hope that he stays away. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 21, 2009 at 11:54 AM

Awesome scary write Martin. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

October 21, 2009 at 9:01 AM

Neat Haiku,(s) Martin! Great imagery- I am transported to a lone house on a lonely country road, looking over the window on a bright moon lit night. And what do I see- a pumpkin patch with a single Great White Pumpkin! Wait...did I see it rise? It's moving!!! It's coming at me!! Great job! Peace, Audrey