Pandita Sietesantos Poet Cinquain

White Peacock

White Peacock

Snow-white
beauty unfurls 
embroidered silk plumage, 
fashioned by fingertips of the
Divine.


01-12-2015

Contest:      An American Beauty: Write Like Adelaide (Cinquains)
Sponsor:     Andrea Dietrich
Placement:  5th

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Al Juman July 20, 2018 at 10:06 PM Simple smooth description my dear---wonderful Pandita Sietesantos July 21, 2018 at 11:55 AM Hi my dear Al, thank you so much for complimenting my work. Your encouraging, supportive words continue to inspire me. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Susan Ashley November 15, 2017 at 8:18 PM Pandita, every lovely line combines elegantly to create this ethereal gem. A most amazing Cinquain. Such delicate and pristine beauty in your lush lines of unblemished imagery. Excellent and enjoyed my talented friend! My warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Pandita Sietesantos November 19, 2017 at 11:40 AM My dear friend, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging supportive words continue to uplift me. Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Best regards. Pandita

Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 8:22 PM love the imaginary pandita very beautifully painted piece dear pal Pandita Sietesantos February 5, 2015 at 9:03 PM It is so nice to hear from you, dear friend, and a delight to receive your sweet compliments! Thank you so much! Warmest regards. Pandita

Michael Miers February 3, 2015 at 6:41 AM oh. very pretty. Pandita Sietesantos February 3, 2015 at 2:06 PM Hi Michael, Thanks for visiting. I appreciate you kind compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Skat A February 1, 2015 at 2:30 PM PANDITA, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT Pandita Sietesantos February 1, 2015 at 3:26 PM Hi SKAT A, thank you so much for stopping by with your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Barbara Gorelick January 28, 2015 at 11:18 AM Glad you chose this visual..I couldn't do a thing with it..Congrats , a pretty picture you painted. BG Pandita Sietesantos January 28, 2015 at 1:00 PM Hi Barbara, I thank you so very much for visiting and for your wonderful encouraging compliments! Warmest regards, Pandita.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 28, 2015 at 8:28 AM A beautiful image, Pandita! I keep forgetting to add you to my favorite poets list. I'm going to do it now...congrats and hugs, Rhonda Pandita Sietesantos January 28, 2015 at 12:57 PM My dear Rhonda, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging words continue to inspire me and support my efforts. Thank you also for adding me to your favorite poets list!!!! Warmest regards! Pandita

Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 11:08 AM Great visual interpretation, Pandita! That third line is so pretty...and so is the inspired ending. #7 Congrats on your deserved win. hugs // paul Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:26 PM Thank you, thank you, Paul! I so very much appreciate your kind encouragement! Have a lovely day! Pandita.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 26, 2015 at 10:18 AM "fingertips of the Divine" Pandita , for me. Very happy on your win. God bless.Love>rajat Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:27 PM Many thanks, dear Rajat, for your continued support which I appreciate! Pandita.

Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 5:45 AM Congrats on the win Pandita... beautiful linea. Lov,nad! Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:30 PM Hi Nad, I appreciate you kind compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Sandra Haight January 25, 2015 at 7:46 PM Very creative way you imaged the white peacock with your lovely words, Pandita. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:52 PM Hi Sandra, thank you for stopping by with your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2015 at 4:15 PM Pandita, I love the line about embroidered silk plumage, Kind of makes me wish I had placed this a bit higher on the list now. Congrats in my contest. Best one of the peacock picture. Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 1:00 PM Hi Andrea, thank you so very much - I am just happy that this one was placed on the winners' list! And I truly appreciate your kind compliment! Pandita.

Richard Lamoureux January 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM I would have expected this one to place higher. I think you have done a splendid job! Congratulations. Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:22 PM Thank you, dear Richard for returning with your superlative compliments which brightened my day! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Jan Allison January 25, 2015 at 2:43 PM Dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:24 PM Hi Jan, I appreciate your congratulations on this piece! Thank you. Pandita.

Rob Carmack January 25, 2015 at 2:32 PM Perfect ending. Congrats. Pandita Sietesantos January 26, 2015 at 3:31 PM I appreciate you kind compliments, Rob! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Richard Lamoureux January 19, 2015 at 7:43 PM I was contemplating writing on this picture, you have done an exquisite job Pandita. Pandita Sietesantos January 20, 2015 at 7:04 AM Richard, it is so nice for you to visit. Thank you for the very lovely compliment! I am sure that you would have written a beauty on this visual, but I love your piece on the balloons! Thank you so much for stopping by. Warmest regards. Pandita

Lei Strauss January 16, 2015 at 4:51 AM This poem incredibly gives me a spectacular picture! I love it! Pandita Sietesantos January 16, 2015 at 9:55 AM Hi Lei, thank you my friend for stopping by and leaving such a great compliment! Enjoy the weekend! Pandita.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 15, 2015 at 12:21 PM A brilliant interpretation of Visual #2 Sanchez style. Loved it Pandita. Good luck.For me a winner....rajat Pandita Sietesantos January 16, 2015 at 9:53 AM My friend, Rajat, thanks for the always sweet compliments! You just brightened up my day! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2015 at 4:09 AM Beautiful! I once had a cousin who raised peacocks; he had 2 white ones and this poem reminded me of collecting feathers from the ground of his farm. Your poem has brought back a wonderful memory. Pandita Sietesantos January 16, 2015 at 9:52 AM I love these wonderful creatures and it is such a big compliment that this piece was able to remind you of a happy experience! Thank you my friend and have an enjoyable weekend! Pandita

Kayod5 Kayode January 13, 2015 at 4:06 AM This is simply fantastic Pandita,goodluck in the contest...huggs Pandita Sietesantos January 13, 2015 at 12:43 PM Thank you so very much, my friend, Kayode for your wonderful compliments. I just love the beauty and majesty of peacocks! Pandita.

Francine Roberts January 12, 2015 at 7:59 PM good luck in the contest, lovely piece you've penned here Pandita Sietesantos January 12, 2015 at 8:39 PM Hi Francine, it's really nice hearing from you and receiving your kind compliments. Thank you very much and wishing you a wonderful year ahead! Pandita.

Kika Ayala January 12, 2015 at 4:00 PM This is visually stunning and an enjoyable read! Best wishes. Kika.

Jan Allison January 12, 2015 at 3:45 PM Such beautiful imagery Pandita - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Pandita Sietesantos January 12, 2015 at 3:57 PM Many thanks, Jan! I appreciate the good wishes. Pandita.