White Peacock

White Peacock
Snow-white beauty unfurls embroidered silk plumage, fashioned by fingertips of the Divine.
01-12-2015 Contest: An American Beauty: Write Like Adelaide (Cinquains) Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 5th

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Date: 7/20/2018 10:06:00 PM
Simple smooth description my dear---wonderful
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/21/2018 11:55:00 AM
Hi my dear Al, thank you so much for complimenting my work. Your encouraging, supportive words continue to inspire me. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita
Date: 11/15/2017 8:18:00 PM
Pandita, every lovely line combines elegantly to create this ethereal gem. A most amazing Cinquain. Such delicate and pristine beauty in your lush lines of unblemished imagery. Excellent and enjoyed my talented friend! My warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/19/2017 11:40:00 AM
My dear friend, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging supportive words continue to uplift me. Hope you are enjoying a beautiful weekend! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 2/5/2015 8:22:00 PM
love the imaginary pandita very beautifully painted piece dear pal
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/5/2015 9:03:00 PM
It is so nice to hear from you, dear friend, and a delight to receive your sweet compliments! Thank you so much! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 2/3/2015 6:41:00 AM
oh. very pretty.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/3/2015 2:06:00 PM
Hi Michael, Thanks for visiting. I appreciate you kind compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 2/1/2015 2:30:00 PM
PANDITA, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/1/2015 3:26:00 PM
Hi SKAT A, thank you so much for stopping by with your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/28/2015 11:18:00 AM
Glad you chose this visual..I couldn't do a thing with it..Congrats , a pretty picture you painted. BG
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/28/2015 1:00:00 PM
Hi Barbara, I thank you so very much for visiting and for your wonderful encouraging compliments! Warmest regards, Pandita.
Date: 1/28/2015 8:28:00 AM
A beautiful image, Pandita! I keep forgetting to add you to my favorite poets list. I'm going to do it now...congrats and hugs, Rhonda
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/28/2015 12:57:00 PM
My dear Rhonda, I love your work and thank you so much for complimenting mine. Your encouraging words continue to inspire me and support my efforts. Thank you also for adding me to your favorite poets list!!!! Warmest regards! Pandita
Date: 1/26/2015 11:08:00 AM
Great visual interpretation, Pandita! That third line is so pretty...and so is the inspired ending. #7 Congrats on your deserved win. hugs // paul
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, Paul! I so very much appreciate your kind encouragement! Have a lovely day! Pandita.
Date: 1/26/2015 10:18:00 AM
"fingertips of the Divine" Pandita , for me. Very happy on your win. God bless.Love>rajat
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:27:00 PM
Many thanks, dear Rajat, for your continued support which I appreciate! Pandita.
Date: 1/26/2015 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on the win Pandita... beautiful linea. Lov,nad!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hi Nad, I appreciate you kind compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Date: 1/25/2015 7:46:00 PM
Very creative way you imaged the white peacock with your lovely words, Pandita. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:52:00 PM
Hi Sandra, thank you for stopping by with your lovely compliments which I very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/25/2015 4:15:00 PM
Pandita, I love the line about embroidered silk plumage, Kind of makes me wish I had placed this a bit higher on the list now. Congrats in my contest. Best one of the peacock picture.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 1:00:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you so very much - I am just happy that this one was placed on the winners' list! And I truly appreciate your kind compliment! Pandita.
Date: 1/25/2015 3:51:00 PM
I would have expected this one to place higher. I think you have done a splendid job! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, dear Richard for returning with your superlative compliments which brightened my day! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Date: 1/25/2015 2:43:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:24:00 PM
Hi Jan, I appreciate your congratulations on this piece! Thank you. Pandita.
Date: 1/25/2015 2:32:00 PM
Perfect ending. Congrats.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2015 3:31:00 PM
I appreciate you kind compliments, Rob! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Date: 1/19/2015 7:43:00 PM
I was contemplating writing on this picture, you have done an exquisite job Pandita.
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:04:00 AM
Richard, it is so nice for you to visit. Thank you for the very lovely compliment! I am sure that you would have written a beauty on this visual, but I love your piece on the balloons! Thank you so much for stopping by. Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 1/16/2015 4:51:00 AM
This poem incredibly gives me a spectacular picture! I love it!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/16/2015 9:55:00 AM
Hi Lei, thank you my friend for stopping by and leaving such a great compliment! Enjoy the weekend! Pandita.
Date: 1/15/2015 12:21:00 PM
A brilliant interpretation of Visual #2 Sanchez style. Loved it Pandita. Good luck.For me a winner....rajat
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/16/2015 9:53:00 AM
My friend, Rajat, thanks for the always sweet compliments! You just brightened up my day! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita.
Date: 1/15/2015 4:09:00 AM
Beautiful! I once had a cousin who raised peacocks; he had 2 white ones and this poem reminded me of collecting feathers from the ground of his farm. Your poem has brought back a wonderful memory.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/16/2015 9:52:00 AM
I love these wonderful creatures and it is such a big compliment that this piece was able to remind you of a happy experience! Thank you my friend and have an enjoyable weekend! Pandita
Date: 1/13/2015 4:06:00 AM
This is simply fantastic Pandita,goodluck in the contest...huggs
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/13/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend, Kayode for your wonderful compliments. I just love the beauty and majesty of peacocks! Pandita.
Date: 1/12/2015 7:59:00 PM
good luck in the contest, lovely piece you've penned here
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/12/2015 8:39:00 PM
Hi Francine, it's really nice hearing from you and receiving your kind compliments. Thank you very much and wishing you a wonderful year ahead! Pandita.
Date: 1/12/2015 4:00:00 PM
This is visually stunning and an enjoyable read! Best wishes. Kika.
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Date: 1/12/2015 3:45:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Pandita - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/12/2015 3:57:00 PM
Many thanks, Jan! I appreciate the good wishes. Pandita.
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