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White Orchid

White Orchid by Amy Swanson 2008 White orchid so pure Glistening velvet petals Scent of nature's song.

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Brian Strand

Date: 12/7/2008 12:58:00 AM

Loved L3 Amy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/3/2008 9:50:00 PM

Great haiku, you have a way of capturing my attention. Nice flow and structure, thanks for your comments on my poem. Sorry it brought back old memories, I wrote that poem for my friend's daughers. Every bit of it is true in detail...Raul

Date: 12/3/2008 5:47:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a beautiful use of this short form. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 12/3/2008 2:55:00 PM

This is fabulous, Amy! You do these really well and I love the images of orchids glistening. Well done.

Stephen Tate

Date: 12/3/2008 11:58:00 AM

This is very nice! Beautiful