White Orchid

White Orchid
       by Amy Swanson 2008


White orchid so pure
    Glistening velvet petals
          Scent of nature's song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 7, 2008 at 12:58 AM
Loved L3 Amy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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December 3, 2008 at 9:50 PM
Great haiku, you have a way of capturing my attention. Nice flow and structure, thanks for your comments on my poem. Sorry it brought back old memories, I wrote that poem for my friend's daughers. Every bit of it is true in detail...Raul
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December 3, 2008 at 5:47 PM
Nice use of imagery for a beautiful use of this short form. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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December 3, 2008 at 2:55 PM
This is fabulous, Amy! You do these really well and I love the images of orchids glistening. Well done.
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December 3, 2008 at 11:58 AM
This is very nice! Beautiful
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