White Oaks and Willows

Iridescent feathers
flutter down
    as a silhouette 
             passes overhead,
inquisitive
I bound over the landscape,
                              following.
I come upon a pond
   with two thirds of it
enshrouded by trees,
     white oaks and willows.

Near the edge
         of the woods
I see a pair of angelic wings
rising out of the water
        attached
             to a body 
   that could
make one’s thoughts falter.
     White oaks and willows.

Elegant hands
      on sleek arms
reach up to preen
    her wings
with two inch nails
        perfect for slicing flesh.
Changing
   into my lupine form
I lope through the high grass
towards the forest,
     white oaks and willows.

Entering the lush,
    shadow coated woods
I find a fallen tree
 and rest my jaws upon it,
watching,
this exquisite 
                temptress
from the shade.
droplets glisten
on the milky white skin
of this fallen angel
       then she shakes her wings
scattering them within
  the white oaks and willows.

Raising those
    tender,
        deadly hands,
she drizzles water
    over her
        long,
            light eating 
                black hair.
As it 
washes over her face
    she opens her mouth
and I notice
    the meat tearing,
deadly curved fangs,
if my jaw wasn’t
   resting on this log
it would have dropped.
     White oaks and willows.

Knowing her
     for what she is
             (my other half)
I slink over 
to the edge of the pond,
but as I 
    touch the water
she leaps into the air
      and she is just a spot
in the sky within seconds
         (so close),
leaving me in
  the white oaks and willows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 7:19 AM
Mark - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 12, 2008 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:28 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:41 PM
Mark - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Buys Avatar
September 3, 2008 at 4:47 PM
An enchanting poem, very visual and intiguing. Congratulations on having this one featured. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done. Regards Heidie
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September 3, 2008 at 10:56 AM
Absolutely wonderful!
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September 2, 2008 at 8:19 AM
Vividly descriptive. Congratulations Mark on "Whit Oaks and Willows" being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 5:37 PM
Mark - Very interesting poem - Imagery was simply excellent - Congrats on being featured - God bless
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August 31, 2008 at 9:17 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this one. The format is visually interesting. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 6:58 PM
Darkly enchanting. Congratulations Mark on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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