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White Oaks and Willows

Iridescent feathers flutter down as a silhouette passes overhead, inquisitive I bound over the landscape, following. I come upon a pond with two thirds of it enshrouded by trees, white oaks and willows. Near the edge of the woods I see a pair of angelic wings rising out of the water attached to a body that could make one’s thoughts falter. White oaks and willows. Elegant hands on sleek arms reach up to preen her wings with two inch nails perfect for slicing flesh. Changing into my lupine form I lope through the high grass towards the forest, white oaks and willows. Entering the lush, shadow coated woods I find a fallen tree and rest my jaws upon it, watching, this exquisite temptress from the shade. droplets glisten on the milky white skin of this fallen angel then she shakes her wings scattering them within the white oaks and willows. Raising those tender, deadly hands, she drizzles water over her long, light eating black hair. As it washes over her face she opens her mouth and I notice the meat tearing, deadly curved fangs, if my jaw wasn’t resting on this log it would have dropped. White oaks and willows. Knowing her for what she is (my other half) I slink over to the edge of the pond, but as I touch the water she leaps into the air and she is just a spot in the sky within seconds (so close), leaving me in the white oaks and willows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 7:19:00 AM
Mark - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:41:00 PM
Mark - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 9/3/2008 4:47:00 PM
An enchanting poem, very visual and intiguing. Congratulations on having this one featured. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/3/2008 10:56:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful!
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Date: 9/2/2008 8:19:00 AM
Vividly descriptive. Congratulations Mark on "Whit Oaks and Willows" being featured. Vince
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Date: 9/1/2008 5:37:00 PM
Mark - Very interesting poem - Imagery was simply excellent - Congrats on being featured - God bless
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Date: 8/31/2008 9:17:00 PM
The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this one. The format is visually interesting. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2008 6:58:00 PM
Darkly enchanting. Congratulations Mark on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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