White Mountains

The White Mountains stand upright
Touching the clear blue sky
Fresh cool air for breathing
In the Freedom land for living

In contrast to the year-round green
Of my motherland's scene
Greenish Mountains in winter
On the bank of the Mekong River
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gist Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:47 AM
I love the mountains.
Hoffman Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Lovely piece with a calming effect.
Evans Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Great nature poem, expressing how observant the poet is.
Dougal Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 8:43 PM
Can see you love your country and the Mekong is one of the world's great rivers. Very nice little poem. Shame they are building dams on it.
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