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White Lilies

colored bunny eggs stir fine day's resurrection-- Easter hunt begins 4/14/2017 Laura Loo's Contest: Easter Haiku or Senryu

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/5/2017 1:05:00 PM

Excellent beauty is hidden in this haiku. Congrats ( belated). Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:16:00 PM

Well done, Nette, congratulations on your win. ~*

Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2017 11:52:00 AM

A delightful Senryu, Nette! In Malta people go mad on chocolate Easter eggs, but traditionally, colouring eggs and treasure hunts are not included. I see from Kim's comment that this is a winning entry so...congratulations:) Hugs // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/19/2017 11:39:00 AM

Congrats, Nette!

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/13/2017 9:59:00 PM

Love it, Nette. : ) A fine day indeed. Coloring eggs... So long since I did that.

White Wolf

Date: 4/13/2017 7:12:00 PM

A wonderful senryu to read on this good Friday, Nette! Have a great Easter and best of luck to you.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/13/2017 7:04:00 PM

Perfect for Easter...hope you have a joyous day.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2017 6:52:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Nette:-) have a wonderful Easter:-) hugs Jan xx