White Light In a Teardrop

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rainbow, phenomenon where white light is bent while entering a droplet of water

rainbow in the sky souls flown - angels cry with me farewell, I love you Written 12.07.2019 "Haiku-hue Poetry Contest" Sponsored: Kim Rodrigues

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 7/22/2019 5:04:00 PM

Lots of life in such a simple statement of understanding. Love this and your other poems as well. Lonna

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/22/2019 9:09:00 PM

Lonna, thank you for your comments. my mum and younger sister passed in Dec 2018, so when I look at rainbows now I think of them, such vivacious strong spirits.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2019 5:40:00 PM

Hello Georgia Kereopa, so nice to meet you. This is a deep beautiful poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/21/2019 8:14:00 PM

Darlene, thank you - I love rainbows, the hope they inspire and to take a moment to think of people we love who have passed.

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 7/13/2019 1:49:00 AM

your thoughts inspire me, thank you

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2019 8:52:00 AM

This is a beautiful write Georgia! Love it!