White Lace

And the snowflake softly fell
Of its journey could it tell
Borne by winds from icy lands
Patterned lace my sleeve it stands

Brothers, sisters, fall the ground
Form a sheet for all around
Under which will nature sleep
In the spring will come to peep

That blinding white before the eye
Nestles soft under dulling sky
Across the surface a chilling breeze
Beneath my feet comes the freeze

The browns and greens have all gone
Drifts are formed and the scenery one
And deep below in lairs and nests
Nature slows, sleeps and rests

Snow though cold has a pleasant side
Creates such beauty the eye abides
The perfect sheet of pure white lace
Provides a cool but sentient place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Daniel C. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Good to see your work featured this week ...It is just one page in front of mine..Excellent creative and descriptive work..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Congrats Daniel my friend on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv.. wishing u the happiest holiday season.. and great blog today too...
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March 8, 2010 at 1:09 PM
I love the images here Daniel..I can easily picture a carpet of snow and the beautiful nature,whilst reading your poem..Charma
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January 22, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Good use of rhyme and imagery to paint a picture with words. Greeting from the USA to you in France. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Quite a gem this poem Daniel, an absolute joy to read >> James
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January 22, 2010 at 9:22 AM
A nice picture you painted. Thanks so much for reading my long "poem" just now. time for me to finally get off here. By the way, I saw your remark to a poet who wrote of cheesecake. Your was the only comment there before mine and it gave me a laught that you had visited a cheesecake poem. haha! Gotta love your last name! andrea
Lusha Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 1:36 AM
Wow you have such a beautifully descriptive stye a true inspiration to write of nature....I really must try...The way you word makes me want to love the snow even though I have just had too much of it recently lol
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Such beautiful words and rhyme Daniel and so well versed in sequence... brilliant write ... we are expecting snow here tomorrow in my home State of New Jersey in U.S.A. so your poem will be apropos to compliment the weather.. please continue sharing your creative writes with us... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Beautiful winter write. I especially like the last line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 21, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Great images of the winter landscape can be found in this poem, Daniel, as well as the hope for spring's "greens" which lie frozen beneath the "White Lace." Excellent rhyme and meter combined with the beautifuly imagery make this a very enjoyable read! Love, Carolyn
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January 21, 2010 at 11:31 AM
very pretty, we missed the snow this year I am afraid.
Montgomery Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Lovely poem :) Keep writing!
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