White Helium Balloon

white helium balloon
not quite taut
from summer heat and long ride
in the rental car

let fly
by a son
to picture a father
going to a better place

crowd of friends, family
circle round
watch the orb
rise ? just slightly

then hover
just overhead
string dangling forlornly
barely out of towhead's grasp

sad eyes turn to adults
unspoken comes the question, "Why?"
"Never one to leave a party early"
nods a bearded desert-rat

slowly the drooping symbol
wafts past onlookers
barely skimming yard, garden
comes to stop over newly-mown alfalfa field

Gravity persists
drops it slowly
string entwines 
among the green stubble

a calloused hand finds 
young boy's shoulder,
shaking, as tears fill 
saddened brown eyes

"Heaven's whereever he most loved to be, son.
That'd be right here. His flight was short."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:34 PM
congrats btw
Breidenthal Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Oooh another nice one! Good poet *snap snap snap* (a poet way of clapping) haah
Buchel Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Thanks for your encouragement, David!
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,susan
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Super job, Susan. Congratulations on your worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
Ramsdale Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
Williams Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:49 AM
hey Susan congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 2:36 AM
Congrats Susan on your sixth place win with this elegant entry on flying luv..
Villanueva Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 5:03 PM
an ending so WOW~~~CONGRATULATIONS my friend for the 6th place win~~smile~~~
Young Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 4:32 AM
i love the ending to this.
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