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White Helium Balloon

white helium balloon not quite taut from summer heat and long ride in the rental car let fly by a son to picture a father going to a better place crowd of friends, family circle round watch the orb rise ? just slightly then hover just overhead string dangling forlornly barely out of towhead's grasp sad eyes turn to adults unspoken comes the question, "Why?" "Never one to leave a party early" nods a bearded desert-rat slowly the drooping symbol wafts past onlookers barely skimming yard, garden comes to stop over newly-mown alfalfa field Gravity persists drops it slowly string entwines among the green stubble a calloused hand finds young boy's shoulder, shaking, as tears fill saddened brown eyes "Heaven's whereever he most loved to be, son. That'd be right here. His flight was short."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2011 8:34:00 PM
Oooh another nice one! Good poet *snap snap snap* (a poet way of clapping) haah
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/8/2011 2:47:00 PM
Thanks for your encouragement, David!
Date: 9/7/2011 8:34:00 PM
congrats btw
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,susan
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 1:18:00 PM
Super job, Susan. Congratulations on your worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:49:00 AM
hey Susan congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:36:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your sixth place win with this elegant entry on flying luv..
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Date: 9/4/2011 5:03:00 PM
an ending so WOW~~~CONGRATULATIONS my friend for the 6th place win~~smile~~~
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Date: 9/1/2011 4:32:00 AM
i love the ending to this.
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