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White Hare

A side view glance, wry Scholastic eyes, wise - white hare Speaks demands answers My mouth dictating rivers Speaks in under-water dreams.

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/28/2018 7:00:00 PM

Wonderful flow and imagery Nancy: Thanks for your visit today. Hugs SuZ

Nancy Beckman
Date: 11/29/2018 4:12:00 PM

Thanks, Suz! :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/30/2018 7:31:00 PM

"My mouth dictating rivers" Wow, this thought could have so many different meanings. This is so beautifully written and presented. Powerful indeed. ~ Brandy

Nancy Beckman
Date: 10/1/2018 6:40:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy! I was wrestling with it and edited, couple weeks ago. Have a nice night!

Silent One

Date: 9/30/2018 3:51:00 PM

Great lines especially for a tanka..

Nancy Beckman
Date: 10/1/2018 6:37:00 PM

Thank you, on a kick for tankas right now! Ha

Frank Sheehan

Date: 9/17/2018 1:50:00 PM

Excellent Tanka. Very creative. Great write.

Nancy Beckman
Date: 9/17/2018 4:47:00 PM

Thank you, Frank!