White Hare

A side view glance, wry
Scholastic eyes, wise - white hare 
Speaks demands answers
My mouth dictating rivers
Speaks in under-water dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Delaney Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Wonderful flow and imagery Nancy: Thanks for your visit today. Hugs SuZ
Beckman  Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Thanks, Suz! :)
Nicole Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:31 PM
"My mouth dictating rivers" Wow, this thought could have so many different meanings. This is so beautifully written and presented. Powerful indeed. ~ Brandy
Beckman  Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Thank you, Brandy! I was wrestling with it and edited, couple weeks ago. Have a nice night!
One Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Great lines especially for a tanka..
Beckman  Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, on a kick for tankas right now! Ha
Sheehan Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Excellent Tanka. Very creative. Great write.
Beckman  Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Frank!
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