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White Feathers Sprayed Red

We war with impunity And weaponise such things as the beauty of flowers And all for what ? When come today we have to guard the statues and Cenotaph that commemorate our fallen heroes Only for them to suffer in death the indignity of being treated with such contempt for the very same right's and freedom they gave their lives for You student's You self effacing intellects You political prophet's You protest You gather You march Underneath your slogan or banner in righteous indignation of your cause Such bravery Such charity Such courage Such sacrifice Once more into the breech the rallying cry to those with spray can in hand to vandalize under the cover of dark with face hidden behind a bandana I doubt their is anything you would be willing to lay your life down for apart from maybe your computer and internet access So next time you log on do yourself a favour and research your family history and see if any of your family members lost there lives and think there but for the grace of god go i These statues and monuments are not supposed to justify or glorify war the complete opposite in fact they are to remind us of the futility and human cost but most importantly of all the cause Millions of people deemed worthy dying for I wonder if year's to come how you will be viewed by history Will people gather to commemorate you build a statue in your honour be you remembered by a bank holiday Or will you hopefully end up instead being a footnote in a museum Entitled When you don't understand your history And talk before you listen You run before you can walk

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Date: 6/22/2020 8:16:00 AM
I personally like poetry like this because it causes one to think. Like you, I am one who’s goal is not to engage in an argument, but rather a conversation. If all of us were to share the same vantage point it would be a rather beige existence. Thanks for the thoughtful responses. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 6/20/2020 7:15:00 AM
I think our perception is shaped by where and who we spend our time with. Conquerors will always write history to suit their own narratives. I believe far to much blood has been spilled for that which no one even remembers. It is glorified so that young men will be seduced to fight for the next cause and so that fat old men may prosper.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/21/2020 8:26:00 PM
Engage everyone and all Most especially your foe Then Engage them In your opposing view points Talk , Converse , Discuss Educate , Learn , Listen Review , Repeat Talk , Converse and Discuss And then Engage again Unless you feel that it is an argument you can't win Because your point is wafer thin
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/21/2020 8:01:00 PM
In regards to your Son and millenialls its my own personal rant Richard against some not all and it is a generalisation i do not wish to tar everyone with the same brush and in no way suggest i am in anyway right. I do not have any children but you are obviously a caring father which i respect. Thank you for engaging i genuinely have learnt and took on board your comments. And i love nothing more than conversation and if nothing poem achives nothing else at least it has begun or started 1
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/21/2020 7:45:00 PM
Agreed Richard People seek like minded people myself included to affirm our own views and again yes right again history is written by the victorious. And yes again guilty it can also be viewed and used as a glorius seduction. I suppose its all about your own personal view point and perspective depending on your point about who you are influenced by. But i take on board all your points and did stop me and make me have a rethink as this is a personal rant
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2020 7:19:00 AM
Having witnessed my son and his friends I am hopeful for the future. I respectfully say that your portrayal of millennials is a bit of a caricature, I believe that someone with your intellect would very much enjoy a meaningful conversation with one of these extraordinary young people. It will quicken your pulse and make you feel more hopeful.
Date: 6/18/2020 4:51:00 PM
Wow now this is a poetic statement from a poet We’re not worthy Christopher, needless to say probably get slated and corrupted by the millennials for your honesty, great stuff David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/18/2020 5:17:00 PM
Don't care about getting slated David so long as it can be backed up and has a point and admitting to the fact i have learned a lot off you and the greatest compliment i could pay you is when you commented on 1 of your poems in spite of criticism you put across your point of view based on fact and personal experience and had the balls and conviction to say this . I STAND BY EVERY WORD I SAY You can judge a man by what he has to say
Date: 6/18/2020 4:54:00 AM
Out of all the poems in your portfolio, so far, Flaherty...this one is the strongest and most intelligent. Regards, I'm no expert, L. x
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 6/18/2020 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Infinity Leanne

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