White Egret Flying

white egret flying disappears in morning mist ghost of moon lingers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 1:23:00 AM

Oh,man, you are getting really GOOD at these, my dear!! this is just awesome. I am up and down, Barbara, since you asked. My arm is still and I'm doing therapy to get it moving again. My back is kind of aching now. I need to get to bed but wanted to catch up on things here. At least the bursitis part is gone (i sure hope so) HOpe you are well too. LUv, Andrea

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/9/2011 7:18:00 PM

Beautiful haiku! Thank you for your comment and thank you for pointing out the typos - I have corrected them. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/9/2011 4:04:00 PM

Now see this is what I have come too kinow as a true Haiku, Barbara. This is the style I believe Brian Strand was teaching a while back in one of his contests. I really like it. very nniiiicccce ! and oh yes , thanks for your comment. I appreciate it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/8/2011 11:34:00 AM

Beautiful image of the egret, Barbara. No, I didn't get a message from you. That's okay. I know how busy you are. Had to leave my sister's last night. We don't get along at all. She didn't like the clothes I bought for my visit to see her. Made me wear her clothes and now I have an urgent message to send back a sweater I was wearing when I left. She NEEDS it for a Baptism next weekend. Wasted trip. Have a nice weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2011 9:54:00 AM

Great one that reads like an eerie morn..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 6:11:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your magnificent poetry this morning Barbara. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/7/2011 5:13:00 PM

Enjoyed the visual......stimulating!!

Susan Buchel

Date: 7/7/2011 5:10:00 PM

exquisite!