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In a cage of wrought iron, a white dove resides, A symbol of love—of purity, where innocence abides. It sings its song, a melody of longing and despair, But its cries for attention are lost in the air. Upon its perch, it dances with poise and grace, Yet its captor’s gaze remains fixed on another’s face. The cage, once a haven, now a prison cold, Where loneliness and isolation take their suffocating hold. A dark shroud descends to silence the bird’s plea, Cloaking its beauty, its spirit, for none to see. In the shadows it lingers, the bird’s resolve wanes, Thoughts of freedom, hope refrains. Yet beneath the veil of darkness and gloom, The daring dove dreams of rising from this tomb. To soar once more in the boundless sky above, A free spirit, on a quest for love. Though trapped and forgotten, its soul stays strong, For within its breast, love’s flame burns on. One day, perhaps, the cage will open wide, And the white dove of love will spread its wings and fly.

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Date: 6/16/2024 1:08:00 AM
I feel sorry for the dove, but perhaps, the bird's captor is part of the desolation too. I was impressed by the sense of gloom. I found this poem to be captuvating. It was an excellent read.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/16/2024 6:36:00 AM
The captor always imparts some emotion and responsibility upon its captive, and this case is no different. This tale does have a veil of gloom hanging over it. However, hope is hiding underneath. Hope is all that is left. Thank you so much for the kind words and positive feedback Hilda!! It’s been a pleasure, have a wonderful day
Date: 6/2/2024 10:32:00 AM
Rhymes are an entertainment to the soul and comfort to the heart. This is truly amazing and a fantastic representation of a dove, both in its majestic expression of purity and its restricted existence in a cage. Weldone Edward.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/2/2024 10:48:00 AM
Thank you for stopping in and sitting a spell with my words Funom. I greatly appreciate your feedback and am so pleased you found something that resonated with you in my writing, that is the truest compliment.
Date: 5/29/2024 3:43:00 PM
yes, perhaps..i really enjoyed the rhyming and natural sounding alliteration in this; a lovely poem of resilience and subtle romance...thanks for visiting and commenting on my work
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/29/2024 8:16:00 PM
Wow Charlotte! What an honor to have you visiting my page!!! And your lovely review too, I am so honored and humbled. Many Thanks my dear. Have an enchanting evening
Date: 5/29/2024 6:00:00 AM
Hey Edward, I just read "White Dove" and I’m absolutely captivated. Your portrayal of the dove’s struggle and longing is so powerful and touching. The imagery of the cage transforming from haven to prison is heart-wrenching, and your words beautifully capture the resilience of the spirit. The hope and love woven into the poem are truly inspiring. You've crafted something deeply moving and evocative. Keep writing, you have a gift! - Blessings, Daniel
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/29/2024 6:12:00 AM
I appreciate your kind words and thoughtful feed back Daniel. I am so pleased that you found something in my penning that inspired and moved you. That is the greatest compliment.
Date: 5/28/2024 6:22:00 PM
' The white dove of love will spread its wings and fly. ' Yes, because it is meant to be. Keeping someone grounded, when they belong in the sky, is wrong on many levels. Your words touch my heart so deeply. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 5/28/2024 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Brandy. “Even a caged bird still sings.”

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