White dab of frosting

a runaway cloud
streaks through an open sky
spoiling the otherwise perfect blue



AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2025

bluecolornatureskyfree verse

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Trina Layne

March 29, 2025 at 11:13 AM

Is this picture AI generated :) I love clouds. I love the sky and I love blue. You had me at cloud! I especially like the latent meanings that might be here as well. The almost perfect state of things is a constant reminder that we live in an imperfect world ~ Trina.

Line Gauthier

March 29, 2025 at 2:31 PM

Beautiful interpretation, Trina ~

White dab of frosting

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