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a runaway cloud streaks through an open sky spoiling the otherwise perfect blue AP: Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on March 29, 2025

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Trina Layne

Date: 3/29/2025 11:13:00 AM

Is this picture AI generated :) I love clouds. I love the sky and I love blue. You had me at cloud! I especially like the latent meanings that might be here as well. The almost perfect state of things is a constant reminder that we live in an imperfect world ~ Trina.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2025 2:31:00 PM

Beautiful interpretation, Trina ~