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White Christmas

placing holly wreaths on the snow covered headstones - - carols from the church written 14th November for Tania's Winter holiday haiku contest

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/30/2021 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! A very moving Haiku....touches ones heart! Blessings, Paulette

Eve Roper

Date: 11/29/2021 6:43:00 PM

Love this one, Jack. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2021 3:21:00 AM

I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara..I knew it would place high.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2021 6:50:00 PM

back with my congrats on your awesome ku.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/27/2021 9:26:00 AM

Beautiful and sad all at once! Congratulations, Jack!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2021 5:07:00 PM

many congrats on your win Jack I love this poem xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/26/2021 12:23:00 PM

Jack, haunting imagery, well done, congratulations on your winning placement!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 11:20:00 AM

wonderful juxtaposition Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/17/2021 6:10:00 PM

Wonderful contrast, The Green holly, red berries against the whiteness of snow, Great haiku, yes you open one's imagination and thought, as to the scene.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2021 1:38:00 PM

In my opinion this one is VERY strong. Just how I feel a haiku should be!

Judy Ball

Date: 11/15/2021 7:57:00 AM

A sweet and solemn picture here Jack. Beautifully done with great imagery. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Paul Callus

Date: 11/14/2021 10:02:00 AM

A haiku of contrasts. The carols bring a message of hope; not all comes to an end with death. ~ Best regards my friend // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2021 8:31:00 AM

Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Not a really happy visit but we anticipate the time when we will meet again with those we love. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara