Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

White Cap Flipping Waves

white cap flipping waves
mirroring herself
dancing and folding

white cap flipping waves
striving toward ocean
keeping it safe

white cap flipping waves
loving her own cool waters
glorifying the sun

white cap flipping waves...

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M. L. Kiser April 18, 2019 at 5:10 PM I had no idea that the ocean waves danced! Caren Krutsinger April 18, 2019 at 6:42 PM Only during certain tides, and if the right faeries are there.

Heidi Sands April 17, 2019 at 3:29 PM Great writing. I like this :) Caren Krutsinger April 18, 2019 at 2:41 AM Thank you my friend. Have a fantastic Easter.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. April 17, 2019 at 2:40 PM I too like the repetition Great imagery of these waves Caren Krutsinger April 18, 2019 at 2:42 AM Thank you Allen. It was inspired by a photograph.

Noel Flater April 17, 2019 at 12:52 PM I like the repetition of white cap flipping waves, waves like you words repeat, well done. Noel from NoelsArt Caren Krutsinger April 18, 2019 at 2:43 AM I put this out as a "try to repeat" and it worked. Hooray! Thank you for your stop by, Noel.

Kim Rodrigues April 17, 2019 at 6:56 AM Very peaceful! Caren Krutsinger April 18, 2019 at 2:43 AM Thank you Kim. I was not even trying for peaceful.