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White Cap Flipping Waves

white cap flipping waves mirroring herself dancing and folding white cap flipping waves striving toward ocean keeping it safe white cap flipping waves loving her own cool waters glorifying the sun white cap flipping waves...

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/18/2019 5:10:00 PM

I had no idea that the ocean waves danced!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2019 6:42:00 PM

Only during certain tides, and if the right faeries are there.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/17/2019 3:29:00 PM

Great writing. I like this :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2019 2:41:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Have a fantastic Easter.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/17/2019 2:40:00 PM

I too like the repetition Great imagery of these waves

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2019 2:42:00 AM

Thank you Allen. It was inspired by a photograph.

Noel Flater

Date: 4/17/2019 12:52:00 PM

I like the repetition of white cap flipping waves, waves like you words repeat, well done. Noel from NoelsArt

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2019 2:43:00 AM

I put this out as a "try to repeat" and it worked. Hooray! Thank you for your stop by, Noel.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/17/2019 6:56:00 AM

Very peaceful!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/18/2019 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I was not even trying for peaceful.