V. Deepa Poet Haiku

White Blushing Bun

 white milky moon bloom
   dazzles eyes of peace questers
        oozes odium

August 23, 2020

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Gershon Wolf August 27, 2020 at 5:46 PM You are going to laugh, Deepa: When I read this the first time, I read this: ... 'oozes opium'... How about that?! :) gw V. Deepa August 28, 2020 at 3:01 AM Lol, oozes opium~I really had a good laugh dear Gershon sir:-D:-) Your first glimpse at my Muse made me smile:-) Thankyou for the kind visit and humour filled compliment:-) Have a great day.Take care~Deepa

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2020 at 3:43 PM alliteration AND assonance. NICE! V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 2:45 AM Thankyou dear Andrea mam for the kind compliment.:-) Have a great day.Much love:-)

Vijay Pandit August 25, 2020 at 8:24 AM Lovely haiku! V. Deepa August 27, 2020 at 2:44 AM Thankyou dear Vijay sir:-) Glad you liked my Haiku.Take care. Have a lovely day..:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 23, 2020 at 11:48 AM Hello Deepa, i like the full moon. moon has a brightness. I see a face in the full moon. the full moon has stars shining brightly. Much love Darlene V. Deepa August 25, 2020 at 6:47 AM Yes , Darlene mam.. I love the moon too.Sometimes feel peaceful while gazing at it.:-) I am tied up with lot of works here..not finding time to login. Will SP mail you soon.Take care. Much love:-)