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White Balloon

A white balloon flew
Taking away a short note
To an  unknown place
With secret message that waits
Decoding between the lines

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James Inman

Date: 7/7/2017 8:43:00 AM

The mystery of wondering where and who it will be who finds it and the excitement if its returned. A lovely poem Nayda.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/7/2017 11:52:00 AM

Thank you James.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/1/2017 11:09:00 PM

A lovely balloon that our mind's eye follows, pondering the message, wondering who it's for. Perhaps hoping it is for me. <3

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/1/2017 11:12:00 PM

Thanks for your feedback Kim.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/1/2017 9:20:00 AM

Wonder whether it ever would be read? Nice mysterious tanka, Nayda:)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/1/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Jo.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/1/2017 7:59:00 AM

That would be like a note in a bottle, would it not? Nicely done, Mrs Nayda. This one is fun:)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/1/2017 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Daniel.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/1/2017 2:22:00 AM

Nice tanka Nayda. I love the intrigue...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/1/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Charlie.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2017 2:13:00 AM

Fascinating theme Nayda ... I wonder if the message gets received and understood! A great twist on message in a bottle:-) hugs Jan x

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/1/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Jan.

White Balloon

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