White Balloon

A white balloon flew
Taking away a short note
To an  unknown place
With secret message that waits
Decoding between the lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 8:43 AM
The mystery of wondering where and who it will be who finds it and the excitement if its returned. A lovely poem Nayda.
Negron Flores Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you James.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 11:09 PM
A lovely balloon that our mind's eye follows, pondering the message, wondering who it's for. Perhaps hoping it is for me. <3
Negron Flores Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 11:12 PM
Thanks for your feedback Kim.
Daniel Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Wonder whether it ever would be read? Nice mysterious tanka, Nayda:)
Negron Flores Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Thank you Jo.
Turner Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:59 AM
That would be like a note in a bottle, would it not? Nicely done, Mrs Nayda. This one is fun:)
Negron Flores Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Daniel.
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 2:22 AM
Nice tanka Nayda. I love the intrigue...
Negron Flores Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Charlie.
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 2:13 AM
Fascinating theme Nayda ... I wonder if the message gets received and understood! A great twist on message in a bottle:-) hugs Jan x
Negron Flores Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Jan.
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