White As Sand

I reach for you when my soul  is dreary
when the choice between "one more time”
 and " not ever" leaves me 
screaming at  the edge of surrender,
white as pale sand , not knowing
what is "right" and what "could have become". 

You reach for me when the whitened zephyr
is one last breath – as the tenor 
of your voice pulls me from this 
empty existence. This haunting ghost
of  life’s chapters hisses , devoid of light
slain by a frosty cry dressed as goodbye.

But, should I stand within the realm  
of mercy that comes from letting go 
or the promise of your grains re-echoing
while brushed in your embrace ...
I choose the quite of my own power.



Sound Of Color Contest
11-26-13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/11/2014 2:45:00 PM
Wonderful color vibrations allowing the eyes to hear! Stellar, Troy! My best, chuck
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Date: 12/12/2013 5:10:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2013 8:26:00 AM
Troy, a wonderful poem of colored sound. ..hugs..Linda
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Date: 12/10/2013 10:04:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Troy
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Date: 12/10/2013 4:10:00 PM
this is different for white, and it's gorgeous poetry. Congrats. I like yours a lot.
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Date: 12/10/2013 11:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem again Troy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2013 9:08:00 AM
Love the haunting quality of this poem and the way you connected the white of a cold breath to sadness. Congrats and thank you for entering I am glad this contest gave me an opportunity to see your work..
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:07:00 AM
- A lovely and touching poem, Troy. - Well done! - Wish you luck in the contest. (my suggestion ... "Yellow boots sings" :)))) welcome to read it :)) - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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