White

Good bye it says with a mute prayer
 as I close the door, it’s white  
It quietly whispers from the walls 
words of wisdom  
Hush it puts me to sleep 
the last thing I see 
before I close my eyes… the ceiling, 

Its virginity urges me to put my pen to paper
and the spaces amid words form poems.
Its rival, black… sinful, gloomy, self-centered
but white is unpretentious…
ubiquitous in absence of colour
yet willingly gives in 
when hues want to enter.


Date:2/1/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 12:38 PM
WOW, Afroze. One of the best I have seen on the color white. I LOVE this.
Ali Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 8:21 PM
Thanks Andrea, I am glad you liked it.
Campi Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 6:11 AM
I like this poem very much. It is quite interesting.
Ali Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 7:37 AM
- A very well written poem, Afroze .... on white paper. . . If it is to the contest ... I wish you good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ali Avatar
January 5, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Thanks a lot:)
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