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In all my life I’ve always dreamed I’ll meet someone lovely like you As if our lasting love was meant We’ll be together all life through, Just like a whistle in the wind. We meandered through our life together Living in one large oversize chamber We pass from soft spring to winter weather Through all thick and thin we’ll just remember. The vast universe was ours to enjoy As if our spacious room has no more walls, Say who can dare our lasting love destroy, I hear the whistle in the wind that calls. In all my life I’ve always dreamed I’ll meet someone lovely like you As if our lasting love was meant We’ll be together all life through, Just like a whistle in the wind. Listen my love, just listen o my dear The wind is whistling our beautiful song Our love tune comes over so clear, so clear, Thus in bliss we will make love all night long. Yet one day all this must forever end, Like a loving whistle in the wild wind, We hope that any of our faults we mend And become new and fine as sweet as mint. In all my life I’ve always dreamed I’ll meet someone lovely like you As if our lasting love was meant We’ll be together all life through, Just like a whistle in the wind.

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Date: 3/3/2021 10:14:00 AM
beautifully written dear Victor true love expressed in every word ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 2/28/2021 5:02:00 AM
Very sweet, Victor! “become new and fine, as sweet as mint”
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Date: 2/27/2021 5:14:00 PM
A beautiful love song Victor and a lovely tribute to the one you loved for life ~~ Belle
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Date: 2/26/2021 10:08:00 PM
Like a loving whistle in the wild wind, Love is forever there. Great song, Victor. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:59:00 PM
A romantic heart heartsong that's as smooth and lovely as a whistle in the wind. :)
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:32:00 PM
Do you have the melody that accompanies these lyrics? I would love to hear it!
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:29:00 PM
I can feel the love of this poem. Good going, Victor.
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Date: 2/26/2021 3:10:00 PM
You know true love, Victor. How blessed you are! This is beautifully penned and evokes much emotion in the reader. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2021 11:26:00 AM
Very nicely penned Victor..
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Date: 2/26/2021 9:56:00 AM
This is such a soft and sweet love poem. I loved it. Great job here Victor. Simply beautiful. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/26/2021 8:02:00 AM
Hi Victor, What a beautiful song of love.Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:09:00 AM
Gorgeous love song Victor, xomo
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Date: 2/26/2021 6:49:00 AM
You speak of love and loss in a salient way. This is a worthy tribute to a significant love. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 2/26/2021 4:52:00 AM
Lovely romantic song of love, Victor. You poured your heart in every word...and let it sing.
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Date: 2/26/2021 4:07:00 AM
East universe...walls. really liked those 2 lines. Could imagine it and made me happy. Lovely lyrics Victor. Thanks for sharing. God bless! Take care, Rama
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Date: 2/26/2021 2:38:00 AM
A lovely lyric Victor. So romantic. God bless ~ Ani
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Date: 2/26/2021 1:51:00 AM
Beautiful and a very romantic lyric Victor. Have a lovely weekend. Hope its getting warmer too. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2021 1:39:00 AM
- A romantic and beautiful song, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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