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Whistling In the Wind

In all my life I’ve always dreamed
I’ll meet someone lovely like you	
As if our lasting love was meant
We’ll be together all life through,
Just like a whistle in the wind.

    We meandered through our life together
    Living in one large oversize chamber
    We pass from soft spring to winter weather
    Through all thick and thin we’ll just remember.

    The vast universe was ours to enjoy
    As if our spacious room has no more walls,
    Say who can dare our lasting love destroy,
    I hear the whistle in the wind that calls.

In all my life I’ve always dreamed
I’ll meet someone lovely like you
As if our lasting love was meant
We’ll be together all life through,
Just like a whistle in the wind.

    Listen my love, just listen o my dear
    The wind is whistling our beautiful song
    Our love tune comes over so clear, so clear,
    Thus in bliss we will make love all night long.

    Yet one day all this must forever end,
    Like a loving whistle in the wild wind,
    We hope that any of our faults we mend
    And become new and fine as sweet as mint.

In all my life I’ve always dreamed
I’ll meet someone lovely like you
As if our lasting love was meant
We’ll be together all life through,
Just like a whistle in the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gilmour Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 10:14 AM
beautifully written dear Victor true love expressed in every word ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Very sweet, Victor! “become new and fine, as sweet as mint”
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February 27, 2021 at 5:14 PM
A beautiful love song Victor and a lovely tribute to the one you loved for life ~~ Belle
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 10:08 PM
Like a loving whistle in the wild wind, Love is forever there. Great song, Victor. Hugs Eve
Buehler Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:59 PM
A romantic heart heartsong that's as smooth and lovely as a whistle in the wind. :)
Pettit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Do you have the melody that accompanies these lyrics? I would love to hear it!
Bayles Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:29 PM
I can feel the love of this poem. Good going, Victor.
Devonshire Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 3:10 PM
You know true love, Victor. How blessed you are! This is beautifully penned and evokes much emotion in the reader. Hugs, Carolyn
May Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Very nicely penned Victor..
Ball Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:56 AM
This is such a soft and sweet love poem. I loved it. Great job here Victor. Simply beautiful. God Bless, JB
Y. Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Hi Victor, What a beautiful song of love.Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Gorgeous love song Victor, xomo
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 6:49 AM
You speak of love and loss in a salient way. This is a worthy tribute to a significant love. Blessings Rick.
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Lovely romantic song of love, Victor. You poured your heart in every word...and let it sing.
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 4:07 AM
East universe...walls. really liked those 2 lines. Could imagine it and made me happy. Lovely lyrics Victor. Thanks for sharing. God bless! Take care, Rama
Jayasankar Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 2:38 AM
A lovely lyric Victor. So romantic. God bless ~ Ani
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Beautiful and a very romantic lyric Victor. Have a lovely weekend. Hope its getting warmer too. Tom
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February 26, 2021 at 1:39 AM
- A romantic and beautiful song, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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