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Whistling In Meadows of Emerging Green

A new day of spring in cool breeze sprints 
As gentle winds glide with joy on their wings
Swaying gracefully from blossoming trees
Whistling in meadows of emerging green

Dawn welcomes me while rising up drizzling
Gathering in puddles and rushing in streams
Playing hide and seek with glimpses of sun
Roaming darkened vistas on cloudy horizon

As winter's end hears the call of my garden
Resurgence it sees of perennial vegetation
Dreaming of budding cherry blossom flowers
Blooming among lilacs, lavender and purple 

Happily you smile in exuberance that enlivens
Lakes and the rivers, and season's aspirations 
For you've heard the chatter of nesting birds
And buzz of honeybees relishing sweet nectar

When darkness cedes to golden bright sunrise
Mauve tinges soften the cobalt blue skyline
As sun's glow blushes in purview of your eyes
Scattering pink desires on fervid orange skies

March 28, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice N contest by Brian Strand

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2019

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Valsa George Date: 2/6/2022 3:45:00 AM After the bleak winter, spring's arrival in all beauty with sprinting breeze, blossoming flowers and perennial vegetation is a welcome change ! A poet like you can make all these indelible ! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/23/2020 5:59:00 PM This first place winning poem is so lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your top win! xxoo Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/23/2020 11:12:00 AM So many colors woven into the texture of your winning piece, Vijay. I can see your picture, smell the flowers and hear the "nesting birds." Congratulations on your first place win. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/18/2019 12:28:00 AM did i miss this?.. .beautiful play of words, vijay!..huggs Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/2/2019 1:23:00 AM I can see those lavender and purple flowers against that evergreen backdrop; wonderful, relaxing imagery that just takes me there instantly. Well done! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/2/2019 3:35:00 PM Much appreciate the kind remarks, MLK..many thanks.

Ralph Sergi Date: 4/1/2019 7:19:00 PM I loved the last stanza, "Mauve tinges the cobalt blue skyline". A great finale! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/2/2019 3:34:00 PM Thank you Ralph..much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/31/2019 5:49:00 PM A joyful read and every image one to savor. Our spring is imminent. My daffodils are up on the fairy garden bank. The wind ruffled them today ......reminded me of that famous line....fluttering and dancing in the breeze. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.SuZ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/1/2019 7:52:00 AM Enjoy your scenic surroundings..thank you for your visit and comments, SuZ.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/31/2019 5:00:00 PM ohh, a complete buffet of spring's finery... glorious write well done, vijay...huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 4/1/2019 7:50:00 AM Thank you Nette.

Pashang Salehi Date: 3/31/2019 2:32:00 AM Your words make a beautiful painting. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/31/2019 9:25:00 AM Thank you Pashang..much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/30/2019 7:53:00 PM LOvely spring imagery abounding in this one, Vijay. TFS with your newest poem. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/31/2019 9:25:00 AM Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

Ralph Sergi Date: 3/30/2019 1:57:00 PM I love the way you articulate nature! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 3:44:00 PM Thank you Ralph--appreciate your visit and comments.

Arturo Michael Date: 3/30/2019 9:43:00 AM You write with feeling...that of Spring...setting a stage of joy...Lovely Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 11:25:00 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Arturo.

Supraja Kannan Date: 3/30/2019 9:16:00 AM Wow wow wow.... Just wow... What a lovely imagery! So beautifully written. Loved this thoroughly. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 11:25:00 AM Appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks, Supraja.

Silent One Date: 3/30/2019 6:54:00 AM Beautiful imagery, beautiful lines my friend.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 11:24:00 AM Much appreciate..thanks for the visit and comments, SO.

Deb Radke Date: 3/29/2019 7:34:00 PM Hi, Vijay. I really love how you write. So vividly, offering a perfect composition of your subject. The fact it is a letter of love only serves to enhance it. Well done. Deb Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 11:24:00 AM Thank you Deb--I enjoyed reading your kind remarks..much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/29/2019 4:23:00 PM This is REALLY beautiful, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 11:23:00 AM Thank you Janice..much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/29/2019 7:23:00 AM A tribute to spring with verses of blooming poetry dear friend, Vijay! Phantasmagorical! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/29/2019 8:02:00 AM Glad you liked it my friend--your kind words are always much appreciated..many thanks, Demetrios.

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/28/2019 9:36:00 PM You could make a blushing rose of pink, blush even more- with your words of beauty. My heart smiles while reading this. :) Spring is in the air, and your thoughts gently wrap around me. Beautiful in every way. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/29/2019 8:00:00 AM You are so kind..always happy to read your comments..much appreciate Brandy..many many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 3/28/2019 7:10:00 PM So beautifully written Vijay....The last stanza is my favorite.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/29/2019 7:59:00 AM Thank you for the visit and comments, Joseph..much appreciate.

Harry Horsman Date: 3/28/2019 5:38:00 PM A poetic gem, Vijay, your words paint the scene so well..love this.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/29/2019 7:59:00 AM Appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Harry.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/28/2019 3:50:00 PM what a colorful painting of artwords from your garden, vijay... love it!...huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 5:36:00 PM Many thanks Nette. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/28/2019 3:07:00 PM Wonderful write Vijay, as always you have produced and presented a gem. Poetry hugs, Jenny. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 5:35:00 PM Happy to read your generous comments Jennifer..much appreciate. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/28/2019 2:24:00 PM - So beautiful this shines in all the colors from the rainbow ... this is the taste of spring, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 5:35:00 PM Very kind of you to say that Anne-Lise..much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp Date: 3/28/2019 2:06:00 PM A very bright and inviting picture you've painted, Vijay, very well presented, my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 5:34:00 PM Thank you my friend..happy to read your feedback..much appreciate.

Eve Roper Date: 3/28/2019 12:44:00 PM Great use of discrpitive imagery, Vijay, beautiful verse. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/28/2019 5:31:00 PM So kind of you to say that. Much appreciate your feedback, Eve..many many thanks.

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