Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Whistling In Meadows of Emerging Green

A new day of spring in cool breeze sprints 
As gentle winds glide with joy on their wings
Swaying gracefully from blossoming trees
Whistling in meadows of emerging green

Dawn welcomes me while rising up drizzling
Gathering in puddles and rushing in streams
Playing hide and seek with glimpses of sun
Roaming darkened vistas on cloudy horizon

As winter's end hears the call of my garden
Resurgence it sees of perennial vegetation
Dreaming of budding cherry blossom flowers
Blooming among lilacs, lavender and purple 

Happily you smile in exuberance that enlivens
Lakes and the rivers, and season's aspirations 
For you've heard the chatter of nesting birds
And buzz of honeybees relishing sweet nectar

When darkness cedes to golden bright sunrise
Mauve tinges soften the cobalt blue skyline
As sun's glow blushes in purview of your eyes
Scattering pink desires on fervid orange skies

March 28, 2019
Placed 1st: Strand choice N contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George February 6, 2022 at 3:45 AM After the bleak winter, spring's arrival in all beauty with sprinting breeze, blossoming flowers and perennial vegetation is a welcome change ! A poet like you can make all these indelible !

Connie Marcum Wong March 23, 2020 at 5:59 PM This first place winning poem is so lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your top win! xxoo

Sam Kauffman March 23, 2020 at 11:12 AM So many colors woven into the texture of your winning piece, Vijay. I can see your picture, smell the flowers and hear the "nesting birds." Congratulations on your first place win.

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2019 at 12:28 AM did i miss this?.. .beautiful play of words, vijay!..huggs

M. L. Kiser April 2, 2019 at 1:23 AM I can see those lavender and purple flowers against that evergreen backdrop; wonderful, relaxing imagery that just takes me there instantly. Well done! Vijay Pandit April 2, 2019 at 3:35 PM Much appreciate the kind remarks, MLK..many thanks.

Ralph Sergi April 1, 2019 at 7:19 PM I loved the last stanza, "Mauve tinges the cobalt blue skyline". A great finale! Vijay Pandit April 2, 2019 at 3:34 PM Thank you Ralph..much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney March 31, 2019 at 5:49 PM A joyful read and every image one to savor. Our spring is imminent. My daffodils are up on the fairy garden bank. The wind ruffled them today ......reminded me of that famous line....fluttering and dancing in the breeze. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.SuZ Vijay Pandit April 1, 2019 at 7:52 AM Enjoy your scenic surroundings..thank you for your visit and comments, SuZ.

Nette Onclaud March 31, 2019 at 5:00 PM ohh, a complete buffet of spring's finery... glorious write well done, vijay...huggs Vijay Pandit April 1, 2019 at 7:50 AM Thank you Nette.

Pashang Salehi March 31, 2019 at 2:32 AM Your words make a beautiful painting. Vijay Pandit March 31, 2019 at 9:25 AM Thank you Pashang..much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2019 at 7:53 PM LOvely spring imagery abounding in this one, Vijay. TFS with your newest poem. Vijay Pandit March 31, 2019 at 9:25 AM Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

Ralph Sergi March 30, 2019 at 1:57 PM I love the way you articulate nature! Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 3:44 PM Thank you Ralph--appreciate your visit and comments.

Arturo Michael March 30, 2019 at 9:43 AM You write with feeling...that of Spring...setting a stage of joy...Lovely Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 11:25 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Arturo.

Supraja Kannan March 30, 2019 at 9:16 AM Wow wow wow.... Just wow... What a lovely imagery! So beautifully written. Loved this thoroughly. Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 11:25 AM Appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks, Supraja.

Silent One March 30, 2019 at 6:54 AM Beautiful imagery, beautiful lines my friend.. Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 11:24 AM Much appreciate..thanks for the visit and comments, SO.

Deb Radke March 29, 2019 at 7:34 PM Hi, Vijay. I really love how you write. So vividly, offering a perfect composition of your subject. The fact it is a letter of love only serves to enhance it. Well done. Deb Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 11:24 AM Thank you Deb--I enjoyed reading your kind remarks..much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy March 29, 2019 at 4:23 PM This is REALLY beautiful, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 11:23 AM Thank you Janice..much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 29, 2019 at 7:23 AM A tribute to spring with verses of blooming poetry dear friend, Vijay! Phantasmagorical! Vijay Pandit March 29, 2019 at 8:02 AM Glad you liked it my friend--your kind words are always much appreciated..many thanks, Demetrios.

Brandy Nicole March 28, 2019 at 9:36 PM You could make a blushing rose of pink, blush even more- with your words of beauty. My heart smiles while reading this. :) Spring is in the air, and your thoughts gently wrap around me. Beautiful in every way. ~ Brandy Vijay Pandit March 29, 2019 at 8:00 AM You are so kind..always happy to read your comments..much appreciate Brandy..many many thanks.

Joseph May March 28, 2019 at 7:10 PM So beautifully written Vijay....The last stanza is my favorite.. Vijay Pandit March 29, 2019 at 7:59 AM Thank you for the visit and comments, Joseph..much appreciate.

Harry Horsman March 28, 2019 at 5:38 PM A poetic gem, Vijay, your words paint the scene so well..love this.. Vijay Pandit March 29, 2019 at 7:59 AM Appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Harry.

Nette Onclaud March 28, 2019 at 3:50 PM what a colorful painting of artwords from your garden, vijay... love it!...huggs Vijay Pandit March 28, 2019 at 5:36 PM Many thanks Nette. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Jennifer Proxenos March 28, 2019 at 3:07 PM Wonderful write Vijay, as always you have produced and presented a gem. Poetry hugs, Jenny. Vijay Pandit March 28, 2019 at 5:35 PM Happy to read your generous comments Jennifer..much appreciate. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2019 at 2:24 PM - So beautiful this shines in all the colors from the rainbow ... this is the taste of spring, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit March 28, 2019 at 5:35 PM Very kind of you to say that Anne-Lise..much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp March 28, 2019 at 2:06 PM A very bright and inviting picture you've painted, Vijay, very well presented, my friend. Vijay Pandit March 28, 2019 at 5:34 PM Thank you my friend..happy to read your feedback..much appreciate.

Eve Roper March 28, 2019 at 12:44 PM Great use of discrpitive imagery, Vijay, beautiful verse. Vijay Pandit March 28, 2019 at 5:31 PM So kind of you to say that. Much appreciate your feedback, Eve..many many thanks.

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