Olusegun Arowolo Poet Rictameter

Whistled

Whistled
                 from recorder
      echoed through twilight night
       reverberating sound of bliss
breath of life blown into the thick wide mouth
   as warm air flows through nostrils` pipe
          fingers move like floating
                floss,as the air
                    whistled.


Olusegun Arowolo     ;Date:05-31-12
Contest:`Sound of emotion` sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Daver Austin January 13, 2014 at 11:00 AM Baroque stuff, huh. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown June 5, 2012 at 10:59 AM A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Tanya Harrington June 4, 2012 at 1:04 PM Congrats. I love the whistle of a flute! I can hear it, feel it and picture the night. Tanya

Robert A. Dufresne June 4, 2012 at 5:39 AM wow how much more passionate and emotional can a write get? very well done Olusequn. congratulations on as awesome win

Poet Destroyer A June 3, 2012 at 6:35 PM OA , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD

Kash Poet June 3, 2012 at 1:34 PM Congrats Olusegun on your big win with this beautiful Rictameter.Enjoyed.

Carrie Richards June 3, 2012 at 1:26 PM What a terrific choice of sound!! Congratulations on a well deserved entry!!

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2012 at 12:57 PM Very descriptive and creative winning work..Congrats on your win and thanks for congrats on my placement..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 3, 2012 at 12:18 PM Congrats on your win, Olusegun! I can hear the music. Great write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud June 3, 2012 at 9:34 AM whistling high notes of congrats on your win in my contest, olu..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song June 3, 2012 at 5:45 AM I KNEW U WOULD ROCK THIS CONTEST, OLUSEGUN. I CAN HEAR THE WHISTLING NOW...AS WARM AIR MOVES THRU NOSTRIL'S PIPE....GREAT LINES! :) gWENDOLEN

David Williams June 3, 2012 at 5:18 AM Olusegun congrats on your great win..David

Amy Green June 3, 2012 at 5:17 AM Congrats on your placing!

Gwendolen Song June 1, 2012 at 11:39 AM Drenched in descriptive sounds! Nette will be WoW'ed B-I-G T-I-M-E! Perfectomundo! U have a great weekend too! Gwendolen

Jack Horne May 31, 2012 at 1:20 PM clever write, my friend. Congrats on all your wins : )