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Whistled from recorder echoed through twilight night reverberating sound of bliss breath of life blown into the thick wide mouth as warm air flows through nostrils` pipe fingers move like floating floss,as the air whistled. Olusegun Arowolo ;Date:05-31-12 Contest:`Sound of emotion` sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 1/13/2014 11:00:00 AM
Baroque stuff, huh. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 6/5/2012 10:59:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 PM
Congrats. I love the whistle of a flute! I can hear it, feel it and picture the night. Tanya
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Date: 6/4/2012 5:39:00 AM
wow how much more passionate and emotional can a write get? very well done Olusequn. congratulations on as awesome win
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:35:00 PM
OA , Congratulations with your fun "SOUND OF EMOTION" entry in Nette's xool contest. take care ~always :-) PD
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Date: 6/3/2012 1:34:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on your big win with this beautiful Rictameter.Enjoyed.
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Date: 6/3/2012 1:26:00 PM
What a terrific choice of sound!! Congratulations on a well deserved entry!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:57:00 PM
Very descriptive and creative winning work..Congrats on your win and thanks for congrats on my placement..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Olusegun! I can hear the music. Great write! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/3/2012 9:34:00 AM
whistling high notes of congrats on your win in my contest, olu..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/3/2012 5:45:00 AM
I KNEW U WOULD ROCK THIS CONTEST, OLUSEGUN. I CAN HEAR THE WHISTLING NOW...AS WARM AIR MOVES THRU NOSTRIL'S PIPE....GREAT LINES! :) gWENDOLEN
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Date: 6/3/2012 5:18:00 AM
Olusegun congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 6/3/2012 5:17:00 AM
Congrats on your placing!
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Date: 6/1/2012 11:39:00 AM
Drenched in descriptive sounds! Nette will be WoW'ed B-I-G T-I-M-E! Perfectomundo! U have a great weekend too! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:20:00 PM
clever write, my friend. Congrats on all your wins : )
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