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Whistle worry

I cannot whistle It's sad but true I try and try yet no sound comes through My lips I purse My teeth I grit I try real hard but blow out spit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/25/2011 7:20:00 PM
Very whimsical! I cannot whistle either:)
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:28:00 PM
Ha-ha! i had that same experience years ago in my childhood life! Thankx for bringing that memory back! Good luck on your clever poems (epically written for sure)! D. W. Breidenthal "A POSITIVE POE"
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Date: 8/4/2011 5:42:00 PM
sooooooooooooo funny Loved it! Jo davis
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Date: 7/29/2011 8:52:00 PM
This is hilarious! Too cute, and it flows so well! Love it.
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Date: 7/29/2011 6:55:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Emerita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:08:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. as this cute piece luv..
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Date: 7/28/2011 9:17:00 PM
It is very humorous write but please give once over to the formation of a Limerick, Emerita
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