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Whistle Stops

Whistle Stops Whistle stops wait for lonesome midnight trains Recalls starlit sentimental journey storms Shivers in express downpours, pelting rains, But sing a litany of train refrains, Rhapsodies of locomotive terrains Rumble through restless lullabies forlorn, Solitary nights silver rails explain As heartbreak punches tickets for hope reborn. Whistle stops wait for lonesome midnight trains But sing a litany of train refrains Solitary nights silver rails explain Recalls starlit sentimental journey storms As heartbreak punches tickets for hope reborn Crossings clang on tracks in memory’s morn. 6-22-21 Contest: Write Me a Trionet Form: Stanza 1 ABaAabAB; Stanza 2 AAABBb Sponsor: LM Hankins

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Date: 6/30/2021 10:46:00 AM
Nice, Sam00i especially like the final line-congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/23/2021 8:19:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem in itself. Write another one for contest or modify this and post as new poem.let this beauty remain. Loved it.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/23/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thanks again Rama! I am so happy that you liked Whistle Stops. Me too! Re-wrote it and posted it as Another Whistle Stop for the contest. Blessings my friend!
Date: 6/23/2021 12:13:00 PM
Wonderful write Sam. Just recheck if you have done this correctly. You can check Milton's example poem. First stanza is a triolet and a triolet has repeated lines. Enjoy your day, Take care, God bless!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/23/2021 1:56:00 PM
Thank you again Rama! I got so caught up in the rhyme scheme, I forgot about the line repetition of a triolet!!!! Once I charted out the lines, I immediately saw my mistake. So grateful for your catch of my error! Blessings my friend.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/23/2021 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Rama! Will review! Thought I had followed the directions. All the best. Blessings! :D"

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