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Whistle Down the Wind

One summers day Gentle stroll Through the bed of reeds In natures fold As i whistle away A tune unheard As all around Whistling like birds But when i view None i see Whats this whistling That follows me A gentle breeze Graces by The reeds all sway As if to sigh Walking on With widened grin The reeds and i Whistle down the wind " Inspired by Nathans Haiku <> Natural Melodies " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature3.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 4:54:00 AM
i love the gentle breeze...--charma
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Date: 7/10/2009 10:14:00 PM
This is awesome James! It makes me feel good that I inspired you to write this. Beautiful my friend. This is a prime example of why I love this site! We help each others writings so much. Nate
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:33:00 PM
. . . so do I!! poet butterfly
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Date: 7/10/2009 1:08:00 PM
Love the writing. Sara
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