Whistle Down the Wind

One summers day
Gentle stroll
Through the bed of reeds
In natures fold
 
As i whistle away
A tune unheard
As all around
Whistling like birds
 
But when i view
None i see
Whats this whistling
That follows me
 
A gentle breeze
Graces by
The reeds all sway
As if to sigh
 
Walking on 
With widened grin
The reeds and i
Whistle down the wind
 
 
" Inspired by Nathans Haiku <> Natural Melodies "

http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature3.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 4:54 AM
i love the gentle breeze...--charma
Leccese Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 10:14 PM
This is awesome James! It makes me feel good that I inspired you to write this. Beautiful my friend. This is a prime example of why I love this site! We help each others writings so much. Nate
Mcmullin Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 2:33 PM
. . . so do I!! poet butterfly
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 1:08 PM
Love the writing. Sara
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