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Whispers Within

Glass wind-chimes in alleyway of mind habitat of thoughts holding guilt in hostage with hidden secrets in fear, never to be told sitting by the window in sound of darkness a breeze of entropy whispers, "you sinned." I can hear soft breath of my loud heartbeats. a hollow mandolin plays an unheard music I close my eyes trying to forget everything Light whispers, why run away from yourself? I walk along a beach of roaring sea waves soothing sand beneath, and faith whispers silent tiny tremors within every part of me reverberating, " Let me take care of you." Dated 11th June 2020 Sponsor Regina Riddle Contest Name Whisper to me |

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Date: 6/16/2020 9:48:00 AM
A divine piece I am sure will reach Gina’s heart as it did mine Debjani. My modem was not working for days and I was unable to get online to read poetry. I am trying to catch up on what I missed. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:28:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery! Your words paint a beautiful picture of the human nature. We all sin, but we can be forgiven.
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:15:00 AM
Your words have a soothing effect as they wrap me in a blanket of chiming melody, the way you pen care towards the end. Blessings for you :)
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:30:00 AM
What a lovely and sweet whisper! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 6/11/2020 3:37:00 AM
Thanks dear friend.. it's so exciting to read your message

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