Whispers Within

Glass wind-chimes in alleyway of mind
habitat of thoughts holding guilt in hostage
with hidden secrets in fear, never to be told 
sitting by the window in sound of darkness
a breeze of entropy whispers, "you sinned."
I can hear soft breath of my loud heartbeats.
a hollow mandolin plays an unheard music 
I close my eyes trying to forget everything
Light whispers, why run away from yourself?
I walk along a beach of roaring sea waves
soothing sand beneath, and faith whispers
silent tiny tremors within every part of me
reverberating, " Let me take care of you."



Dated 11th June 2020

Sponsor	Regina Riddle
Contest Name	Whisper to me |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:48 AM
A divine piece I am sure will reach Gina’s heart as it did mine Debjani. My modem was not working for days and I was unable to get online to read poetry. I am trying to catch up on what I missed. Blessings xxoo
Estep Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Such wonderful imagery! Your words paint a beautiful picture of the human nature. We all sin, but we can be forgiven.
Mishra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 9:15 AM
Your words have a soothing effect as they wrap me in a blanket of chiming melody, the way you pen care towards the end. Blessings for you :)
Brul Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 2:30 AM
What a lovely and sweet whisper! Congratulations on your top win!
Mitra Avatar
June 11, 2020 at 3:37 AM
Thanks dear friend.. it's so exciting to read your message
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