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Whispers Unheard

my friend I've met you in
the most peculiar way
I feel what you feel I cry
as though we speak.....

my friend your not alone
in this world  I too have felt
the loneliness the fear..

one day life won't seem so
cold you'll see the wondrous 
ways of human kind.......

crying so loud but a cry
that isn't heard in hearts
or oides of others...

shamefully I speak of remorse
and guilt as for me 
a life altering journey...

A blade that cuts me open
doesn't leave a trace but grasping 
for comfort it bleeds blood of sorrow
blood of death......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/13/2013 8:33:00 AM
amazing touching beautiful piece top shelf in my books sweet music in words
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Madelin Barton
Date: 9/13/2013 10:04:00 AM
Thank you your comment made my day Liam so happy to get feedback feels like I finally have a voice ~Maddie
Date: 2/19/2013 5:13:00 PM
felt as if you was writing about me. great piece. love your work :)
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Madelin Barton
Date: 9/13/2013 10:06:00 AM
I think a lot of us sit in dark places more times than we'd hope to be but nothing is forever that light we seek will show up in due time ;) God Bless and thank you for commenting
Date: 2/13/2013 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem Madelin
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