Whispers of Your Soul

As starlit night glows, half-lit cast To blaze soul's faith along a dream And hears my wish ‘pon a river glassed, That spills of love’s trails, agleam. I covet deep my prayer's lore As starlit night glows,half-lit cast Igniting air from life's ardor Where arms hold unto peace steadfast. Oh lyre, my tune; from crescent's mast This whispered invocation sung, As starlit night glows, half-lit cast From loud noises through days prolonged. The moon dims, my soulful hums rest On tender lifetime unsurpassed, When heaven grants this need's request As starlit night glows half-lit cast. Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 12/19/2014
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A   Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:44 PM
once again nice win
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 9:44 AM
I enjoyed, Congratulations.
A  Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 12:49 AM
Nette, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 5:08 AM
such an enchanting pen Nette Congrats on placing hugs
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:58 PM
Nice win....LINDA
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 5:07 PM
Hi Nette, your poetic words touch the soul like a whisper. So symbolic and serene. Congratulations on your win. A favorite for me. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Congratulation, Nette, on your winning poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
Kayode Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Congrats on your deserved win Nette...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Your muse touches the celetials, nette, congrats on the win
Deschler Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 4:55 PM
This is so enchanting and serene, like something inside of a dream... A truly lovely poem, Nette. Your words never cease to amaze me! Good luck in Gail's contest!.... I hope that you and your family have a very Merry Christmas!
Kapoor Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 10:50 AM
What a beauty you have created Nette. Brilliantly composed a Poem like a Song. The third stanza is too good and too sweet. A beautiful and lovely sweet Poem to read again and again. It is going as my favorite one. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always with the wishes for a Merry Christmas....Ravindra K Kapoor
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 1:47 PM
- Nette, I have only one word after reading this: BEAUTIFUL! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kayode Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 11:18 AM
Merry Christmas nette and goodluck in the contest...huggs
Vaso Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:59 PM
I am about to go to bed, and this, well what a beautiful last thought to have before sleep! Wonderful!
Sivey Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Your night shines within this amazing write my friend! I love the symbolism in this delightful poem! You have portrayed such a fabulous piece! I really enjoyed reading this gorgeous poem here this evening! What a lovely write, Great Work!!
Goff Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Nette...your first stanza sets an amazing picture of fine art to follow! hope your safe from turbulent weather...jimbo
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 6:38 PM
oh so so beautiful this amazing imagery Nette - you have such a gift my friend - good luck - its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx
Lalion Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Because of the depth and beauty of this fascinating poem,you enlighten the soul with much grace. Hail to you, Nette! Winner!
Parker Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 3:43 PM
The soul is a sanctuary where serenity fills its well, while the bucket waits to be filled by a seeker of truth wanting to quench their thirst.
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