Jacob Frey Poet Rhyme

Whispers of Your Soul

Silence starts at the dead of night
Bringing the hope for a new delight
So we walked to the water
While I told her stories of my father
We lay beneath the moon that night
Such things now were trite
Then in an instant beyond this world of tyrants
We heard words echo through the silence
While still laying by the shoal 
We heard the whispers of our souls
Speaking things we'd always thought
Of which, due to time, we had forgot
Thoughts that had long been dead
As well as stories of the paths we had tread
We heard the whispers of our souls
Laying by the shoal

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Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:57 PM Jacob,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA

Jacob Frey January 9, 2015 at 6:37 PM Thank you very much everyone I appreciate all the congratulations and the support

Maurice Yvonne January 9, 2015 at 3:14 PM Congratulations Jacob on your win with this marvelous write!

Eve Roper January 9, 2015 at 3:09 PM Congratulation,Jacob, on your wonderful winning poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve

Kayod5 Kayode January 9, 2015 at 11:12 AM Congrats on your worthy win Jacob...huggs

Jan Allison January 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM beautifully penned I love the imagery here many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta January 9, 2015 at 10:42 AM Your muse is in the high spirit, Jacob, congrats on the win

Meg Anderson December 20, 2014 at 6:32 PM Beautiful. Very nice. I liked it. Meg

Dorian Petersen Potter December 16, 2014 at 7:16 PM Very beautiful pen Jacob! really enjoyed your poem dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you a very Merry Christmas! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. Jacob Frey December 17, 2014 at 6:33 PM Thank you so very much Dorian, I truly appreciate the kind words as well. I wish you a very merry Christmas. Furthermore, I'm so very glad that you enjoyed this piece, thank you once again.